This story is really good! Overall it's quite well written and believable. Indeed the evolution of their feelings is perfect: as slow as we need for people to adjust to the fact that they have fallen in love, but not too slow either! However sometimes we don't really understand what's going on, especially when you describe their dreams, it's a little foggy.
Do not hesitate to write more stories in the future! It's worthwhile!

Many Maori men also saw it as an insult to their name and to their family name

Plot Twist!

It's awesome so far!

Amazing story! I love this couple!.

You wrote the story I wanted to write! Great job so far!

First of all, I am truly sorry about this person stealing your work. It is so wrong, people don't realize how much work goes into being a writer. It isn't even flattering because they're taking credit for the work you've done.
Secondly your story was absolutely magical, it has real meat to it, life and developed characters. The expressions of love were so genuine. Even the process of it was so real. This is one of my all time favorites and I can't wait to hear more of You!

Btw I definitely want to help shut down this person who has stolen your work.

Aaaand the plot begins! so different!

Another thing I love is you're not jumping right to it. It's a slow progression and character development. Glorious!

My gosh you're amazing! This story has so much substance, it's legitimate and feels so real.

**releases held breath**

That was excellent. I'm sorry I don't have more eloquence to praise the length, the depth, the adventure of their romance, but I'm still processing the happy glee of the ending.

Beautiful story, and lovely writing. Thank you for sharing your hard work with us readers!

posted this update on a03. but i thought I pass it here as well. I had just received a message for wattpad notifying me that the offenders account has since been taken down due to her being underage.

hello, I had just reported her after she had deleted my and other messages asking her nicely to take it down. Very annoying.

I loved the story! Sorry about it being stolen. I hope everything gets cleared up. Umm just an idea, but could you do a sequel with Maui and Moana being married and going on adventures and raising their kids? You do such a amazing job writing, so I was hoping you could. Anyways hope you consider and Good luck on everything else!

Sorry that someone stole this story. What can we do?