This is great! It's hard to find a good fluff where everyone is actually in character.

Because I like pointing parts I enjoyed: "She was his Venus, emerging from the sea in all her voluptuous beauty. [...] Why couldn’t she be naked like Venus?" - hahahahahahah! That's a very Sanji-esque thought.
"like I would ever want to share something made by your hands with those bastards." - Very nice save, Sanji. *claps* xD

XD Awwwh, that was adorable.