| Reviews for Only in Sleep |
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MarshmallowRabbit chapter 11 . 6/7/2019 This is hands-down the best AU story I've read. Every character is written beautifully, and you totally get their personalities from canon across while also making some changes based on the world you've created. I absolutely love the idea of the Connected, and the way everything fits together between the four different "classes" is a great reflection of the canon dynamic. I'm also a huge fan of Sai and Yamato playing roles in the story. So many times these two characters are dropped out of the "Team 7" dynamic, which is such a shame since they were one of the better parts of Shippuden. When Sakura went to rescue Sai and he exclaimed that she was "uglier in person" I seriously laughed out loud and you nailed his character. This story revealed just enough about the world to make it intriguing without being an overload of information which happens in a lot of other AU's. I'm honestly very tempted to write a story based in this world if you would be cool with that. I think a prequel story from Yamato's POV about his time in Root and his eventual union with the rest of his team would be super fun to write. Anyways, amazing story! The pacing was great, and having Sakura as the central character was a good decision since you crafted her to be a very strong "base" for the team. I'm always a fan of authors who give Sakura some good development! |
Mimi-Love-4ever chapter 11 . 4/14/2018 Hi there! Lemme just say that this is the first story with this kind of plot that I’ve read and it is awesome! I think it takes Team 7, and the whole story in general, to another level and I think you’ve done a wonderful job in keeping true to the original story in terms of characterizations. I certainly hope there’s more coming and am very excited to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing! Happy writings, ~*~Mimi-Love-4Ever |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/7/2018 PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/5/2018 I loved this story! It was such a refreshing plot and you conveyed it very well. Great work! |
TheBloodyLoveOfSakuraHaruno chapter 11 . 2/22/2018 I was getting anxious, wondering when the next update is and then realized I never fully finished reading chapter 11... XD Good luck with school! |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/9/2017 ahhhh i love this story so much! this au is perfect - i mean, you captured the team 7 dynamics so perfectly and they way you've blended canon plot points and ideas into your own story is just amazing 333 i have no idea what's gonna happen next. i mean, will orichimaru come back? will the chuunin exams be a part of this, but altered? will sasuke still leave even though he has a closer bond with team 7? mAyBe something happens to the link to drive him away from team 7? |
Innocence and Instinct chapter 11 . 9/18/2017 This is amazing! |
Wasabi-sama chapter 11 . 9/10/2017 Wow! What a hidden gem of a story! It's very well written, with a good balance of dialogue and description. I think it's paced pretty well too. Can't wait to see where you take the plot! |
Phoenixx Rising chapter 11 . 9/8/2017 I liked this one. I liked seeing Itachi. And I like the way you incorporated Zabuza and Haku. I also really love the growing bond between the team. |
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 11 . 9/6/2017 I loved these two chapters! They're SO GOOD! So intense and interesting and awesome! And I'm so glad zabuza and haku are alive! I love them! And I love the chapters so much! |
BookWormFT chapter 1 . 9/4/2017 Great chapter! Although, if sasuke knows Itachi is a spy, will he still seek power? Can't wait to read on! |
Pricililica chapter 11 . 9/4/2017 Amo muito esta fic. |
Dear Mei chapter 10 . 9/4/2017 This is too heartwarming! Im glad they are finally all together |
morpheusandmuse chapter 10 . 9/2/2017 Wow. Wow. WOWWW. I'm so happy :) |
Phoenixx Rising chapter 10 . 9/3/2017 Yay! They got him! Oh my goodness, Naruto's reaction to being outside was so incredibly happy and sad at the same time, I'm totally conflicted. Loved this chapter! I'm so glad you decided to do more than you originally planned. I can't wait for more! |