| Reviews for Maiden |
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Dani2781 chapter 3 . 4/18/2018 It would be better for all the girls to kill themselves they get freedom and all those inbred purebloods wipe themselves out and they win again. |
Dani2781 chapter 8 . 4/18/2018 He wants her to just allow herself to be raped and enslaved whether someone is not a monster and is nice to her or not. Being forced against your will is rape and then he thinks she wants to leave her children with people who are as horrid as the Malfoys to live in that world never knowing there true mother was just a girl raped by their father and he isn't even the father. Narcissa and Lucius are monsters and are deatheaters who bore and raised another deatheater and that's not a future that Hermione wants for her children I am sure. |
i love new storys chapter 7 . 11/20/2017 great chapter |
MOREGAYSTUFFPLEASE chapter 6 . 9/13/2017 This is awesome! Please update! |
Dani2781 chapter 6 . 4/27/2017 Luna is right she's nothing but a cheap mudblood prostitute now, its not like she gets to keep the child, death would be preferable to that life if they all just offed their selves there wouldn't be any more maidens and then no more witches and wizards in Britain anymore maybe that's not such a bad thing. |
padfootsgrl79 chapter 6 . 4/17/2017 you do no one any good dead. apparently luna forget that or doesn't care. it takes more courage to do what you need to in order to survive and live another day to fight, than to give in and give up. |
Snowflake Dazzle chapter 6 . 4/17/2017 Poor Luna and Neville, they just wanted to be together. While I would be mad at Hermione as well, she was just looking out for Luna. Thank you for this chapter! |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/17/2017 I would like to see how hermione is feeling and what she did is she sacrificed her self for luna i think that from now on luna should take responsability of her acts and if hermione can get control over lucius gain his trust it is a good think so she can manipulate them later. I watched some series about some concubines in the history the most powerful ones were the one who accepted their fate knew how to please the emperor but at the same time they worked their way up to power Idk what you want to do with your story but i like it i'd love to see how things evolve |
Snowflake Dazzle chapter 5 . 2/26/2017 Yay, Hermione has another friend. Thank you for the great chapter. |
Keepsake Cat chapter 4 . 2/12/2017 I can't wait for the next chapter! Also, if you need an English beta I'd love to do it :) |
Dani2781 chapter 4 . 1/28/2017 Fuck them you can use a muggle knife and slit some throats. |
Vivid Snare chapter 4 . 1/28/2017 I do love this story :) |
The Necroposter chapter 1 . 1/16/2017 I would seriously refrain from comparing myself to Margaret Atwood, who has no peers and is, in my opinion, the best novelist in the world. But then again, I'm sure it was just awkward phrasing and not your intention. As for this chapter, I really would have liked some more exposition - even a single paragraph to explain what the eff has happened to the Wizarding World. It would be better than no explanation at all. This idea for a crossover is original and could make for a very interesting story. :-) |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/14/2017 Sorry, I can't deal with the rapey stuff. Or your really poor English. Won't be continuing. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/14/2017 Corned beef sandwich, not beef and corn. "Corned" in this instance means salted to preserve it. Corn the vegetable has nothing to do with it. |