You made...Dan...a Prince...Lord have mercy on us all. Sorry. Just Dan is not one of my favorite characters and given his personality, it’s hard to see him as Royalty.

This chapter was actually pretty nice! I liked it because, you get to hear Lucy's thoughts about Cobra and it had a bit of fluffiness as well! Can't wait for the next chapter!

This was a good chapter. I loved how Lucy took a stand against Set; using the book is genius. I wonder what is going to happen next with the book. I'm sure Lucy not leaving it back at the castle has something to do in future, but I will have to keep reading to find out.

I love how Cobra got a little protective of Lucy; its cute. I chuckled a little at how he got frustrated with her running slow. That is so Cobra, but I LOVED how he solved it. I inwardly cheered when he used his roar against Set - it was amazing.

Set is just... wow. I had a feeling Set was the one who killed Dan's parents, but I wasn't sure. Now that it is revealed, I can understand why Dan is a little mad. Set seems like the calm evil since he has everything planned out. I like that. Kek is also a great little helper; so loyal and he has spunk.

Overall, a great chapter that is well written. I like the development of the character relationships. I can't wait to see what you have planned next.

Can’t wait for what is coming next!

Okay... for everyone who is reading the reviews, and see that the author has reviewed her own story... I promise that was not her. She never reviews her own stories. That review that “she” posted was actually me stealing her iPod thinking that was mine, and wrote the review after reading it. It turned out it was her’s and not mine, and that she was logged into her account to read the stories she follows. So that was me, Horsejumper88, reviewing. Not Gajeelredfoxfan808. She is actually a little mad at me doing that, but my cousin will learn to get over it haha A review is a review, right? Now I will post what I put down with her account (again, I apologize...) to make it officially mine LOL

Here is what I put:
“I could literally feel the intensity and mood change with Kek in this chapter. ITS THAT WELL WRITTEN! I kind of saw this coming since Steele did mention his interest in Lucy in the last chapter, but how the offer was presented was very good. You also chose a good setting for everything to take place in.

I’m thankful Cobra walked in when he did; I can think of many senerios that could have happened if Kek’s amger wasn’t shut off... Cobra might of just saved her life in that moment for all I know.

I’m also liking the slow and natural progression between Cobra and Lucy. It just started off as an attraction, which is what usually starts in real life, and as they are getting to know each other it is blossoming. They are not starting to like each other. I’m curious to see where it all goes, and when and how they finally realize they like each other. I’m sure you have it all planned out.

Please continue! I will be waiting! :)”

Again, don’t get mad at GRFF808 for reviewing her own story. That was me, not her. She never reviews her own things. She only reads over her chapters after a couple of hours of posting them, and sees what she can do to make the next one better. I’ve watched her do it; she does try her best. Please continue to read it for her sake. Thanks for understanding everyone!

You got this cliffhanger thing down pat don't you...

I could literally feel the intensity and mood change with Kek in this chapter. ITS THAT WELL WRITTEN! I kind of saw this coming since Setekh did mention his interest in Lucy in the last chapter, but how the offer was presented was very good. You also chose a good setting for everything to take place in.

I’m thankful Cobra walked in when he did; I can think of many senerios that could have happened if Kek’s anger wasn’t shut off... Cobra might of just saved her life in that moment for all I know.

I’m also liking the slow and natural progression between Cobra and Lucy. It just started off as an attraction, which is what usually starts in real life, and as they are getting to know each other it is blossoming. They are now starting to like each other. I’m curious to see where it all goes, and when and how they finally realize they like each other. I’m sure you have it all planned out.

Please continue! I will be waiting. :)

God, i love the way that you write Cobra, i swear im in love with the way you write out his feelings and thoughts! Anyways can't wait for the next chapter, the way your building up the events for the plot is so exciting!

It seems like Cobra discovered something important! I can't wait to see where this goes!

I love this chapter! This one was well thought out, and well put together. I can totally see Cobra in this situation; it fits him.

Great job and keep up the good work!

Out of everything I was suspecting of Setekh, that was not it.

Cliffhanger! Those always leave me wanting more

This chapter is my favorite one so far! As Dan would say, “L-O-V-E”!

It's been a while since I have seen a story like this, and I love it! The only thing I can say about Cobra that can help is that he loves to get under other people's skin and is snarky when he feels the need to be. I'm sorry if that doesn't help (TT~TT) Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is such a great chapter! Love it!