Many months late into this but... Good Lord, this was one hell of an interesting concept.
And I mean, this story looks like it could still go somewhere too. Thee only problem I can find being the grammatical errors and at some points, the words that are left unfinished.

Really liked this. Shame you don't seem to have anymore plans for it.

Was this inspired by Yu Yu Hakusho

I expected this to on a cliffhanger yet I'm still angry. I do enjoy you took this arc as an introduction to the abilities Leni has. It's nice to see more Leni favorite Loud. Keep up the good work, this looks to be a slow start that might pay off big.

Love to see more.

Oh Lisa, you would be better staying ignorant about this whole thing the amount of sheer paranormal craziness will not be something your intellectual mind can comprehend.

This is pretty good :D, keep up the goodwork

I always enjoy hidden badass Leni, just on the prospect of Leni having a lot of hidden potential. Especially when she can carve a bed frame with artistic quality. I do hope to see more.

Last time I familiarized myself with Chinese mythology was when I played SMITE.

I couldn't help but think of doom guy smashing demon skulls in and blasting their torsos out with a shotgun while reading this, But I like where this story is going. I was also thinking of making a story that had something to do with demons, but I don't really know if I'll act on it or not. Anyways good job so far!