Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Quit teasing!

Hurry up and update!

PLEASE continue I like the realisticness(?) of the story, VERY different from someothers so I hope you keep going or maybe restart or something...

I really love this view of Alanna going to the convent. It is much more believable and in character than a lot of other convent-Alanna fics. I know it's been over six years, but if you ever consider picking it up again- please do!

I have a feeling that you won't be updating anytime soon, since youre last entry wasn't even this year, but when I found your fanfic I really liked it. The plot line a "What if..." plot that begins before any of the series ever truly starts off. The idea of Alanna being found out and having to go to the Convent and Thom being sent to palace is an idea that Pierce snuffed out of her readers from the very start. Your view on how the twins developed, Roger's course of action, and the difference of characters emotions seem very plausible from chapter one. I wish you could right more, but like i mentioned above that probably won't happen. Oh well...I still enjoyed reading it. Good job

-xmidnightfangx

P.S.

Ok, just one note (you don't have to fix this) but i think you might have placed the skip bar (or whatever its called) too soon for the break into Roger's scene...just a thought

it's an ok story. just make it longer.

WRITE MORE!

I like this story too...its fun...Keep writing

can u fit it in ur busy schedule to UPDATE this story? please? *puppy look* please?

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! this story is very good! alot better than my own pathetic attempts at a story...o please continue!

ever hear of the word update?

LOVED IT! You characterize well, with enough angst and sarcasm to really get me going! I hated Jonathan anyhow, thank you for killing him.I love the Shang dragon, and Thom. Might we see a hint of the Shang Wildcat? I am eager to see hwere you take this.-Krys

Nice beginning, interesting and unusal - I can't wait to see where your going next. An update soon?

good start in a way i like it but in some lots of ways i just have to read the rest to decide

I like how it's going, very unique and interestingbut one more thing, I LOVE JON SO HOW DARE YOU KILL HIM OFF!GR. Anyway, at least it's not george, never thouht he was more than good friend material. Is gary the pairing?