Oye tu maldición me engañaste, ya me había emocionado XS ... Bueno ahora debes subir doble capítulos }:(

Thanks for the little recap. I'm an avid novel and web novel reader so I know more than most, but it's good to know you help even anime watchers and manga readers

. this is a troll...I thought I saw the title "Sand of Nazarick" on top mean more update hype...but it got shattered into a million pieces with this... Q.Q

The adventurer group that Momonga was with when they went to confront the King of the Forest was called the Swords of Darkness, not the Axe of Cyclone. It's detail changes like that that make me wonder if you're actually familiar with the story, or just making stuff up as you go.

I have trouble believing a level 100 with access to high tier items could possibly be sealed by anyone in the new world, especially if he's a magic caster, which this guy is, and thus has access to stuff like greater teleport and gate in order to just leave any situation where it looks like things might not pan out for them.

Wow, I'm surprised! Didn't expect it, but the story went kinda downhill. But of course it's not flaming, there are several reasons why I think so. I'll list the bad things first, followed by the good points.

1. What's with all those caps. Capital letters all over the place. When using autocorrect, be careful.
2. Why are they speaking bits of Japanese? And it's even words that have a flawless translation and not some pun you can't translate or stuff. Don't tell me they can't say "yes".
3. Combining points 1 and 2, it's "-san", not "-San".
4. Are of Cyclone is in the web novel. The name in the manga/anime/LN is Swords of Darkness. If you go with the web novel, there's no Hamsuke, and no Momon and Nabe, because Narberal disguises as Momon.
5. What's with that reaction? They've been transferred to another world and stuff, and Momonga is like "I'm surprised, a little speechless, but meh" and the guardians don't fall on their knees and pray?

But of course the second chapter wasn't all bad. I liked the idea of how he changes and the forms he changes in. I think nobody else did that so far.

That was harsh, but I'm not really sorry. I wanted to be honest with you, because I think if everything is sugar-coated, authors won't improve. This applies to this story, to other stories and of course to mine, too. I hope you improve and chapter 3 will be a lot better.

Axe of Cyclone or Sword of Darkness? I think we're missing a few person...don't you think?
well either way I'm just going to think of it as Overlord where the timeline are dramatically altered and that few people didn't exist at all. that seem to work.
-Keep up the good work! also when will the next update released?

For a yearly update.. its so short! T_T
I want MOOOAAAAARRRRR! :D

It's a good story, so keep it up...
If you can't make it the way you want, try to see what's wrong and add/remove something... Or read some other story... It'll help...
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And so the horsey emerged! And there was the despair, jealousy, greed, darkness... As humans couldn't grow such a magnificent mane as the almighty horsey... Hamster was forgotten by the humans... *hamster slowly fades away*
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*then hamster gets back after said hamster was smacked on the head for desertion*

is this story going to continue or is there a reason for not uploading a single chapter in about 3 weeks

this is a awesome story, i want to know how momo will react to have a friend in that world.
that chapters was a nice cliffhanger.
i love to read overlord storys and this was a nice story, i a want to read more. sorry for my afoul grammar. i dont offen write in english or to people.
from a new fan.
:D

DONE?
you need to continue this stories here take my fav and like,
just Continue this stories we need as a therapy for what happened in 2016

I will reserve judgement until there are more chapters however I think there could be potential here. Good luck and I hope to see more of this story in the future!

As a side note, you have great grammar and sentence structure!

Okay, a new story dealing with an additional character...pretty generic at first glance. When delving further into the matter, there are a few good things to point out. I liked the character sheet and the description of the times. The MC isn't total OP (yet?) and isn't a cocky douche. I think the story has a lot of potential and will certainly entertain people in the future.

Found no grammar mistakes so far, although you should use more paragraphs. Easier to read.

Enjoyed the story, keep going!

This should be interesting. Following!