Holy crap this fic is AMAZING!

Oh, Nature is going to be pissed...

This is a awesome story, please update sometime this year. -

The legends are true. The best fanfics are the ones that are never updated

Ah well done! I think I found my new favorite ship now c:! OKAY onto the review.
First of all nice grammar, there were a few mistakes, a few left out words, and letter left out of words but in the end I could easily understand what you meant. The details help me visualize what is happening pretty easily.

Now to take some stabs at guessing what is actually happening in the story. Okay so fate suppressed Danny's ghost powers and either sealed his core or took it away from him. I got the feeling that when Eros and Psyche were talking, Danny is actually a god like the two of them. Now for as why Jack can now be seen by everyone adults included.
I have a few possible theories.
1. His close interactions with Danny somehow ended up making him be able to be seen by all.
2. Dannys ectoplasm DNA infused slightly into Jack since he is technically a spirit, making him visible to everyone.
3. Jack is actually a God and his interactions with Danny either sped up his powers growing or Danny interacting with Jack is the reason that Jack is a God now.
But this is me just theorizing, in the end all of them explain how and why Jack can sleep now too. Since he can be seen or has been changed his biology now makes him tired from staying awake and using his powers.

But yeah I hope to see this story finished :) Keep Motivated! I look forward to the next chapters!

Please continue. This is sooooo good

The boys are ace, there's a big mystery afoot, evil twins and strange disappearances-! This is amazing! I'm so glad I found this. It's been a blast to read so far

PLEASE update soon. I'm desperate to hear the rest of this awesome story.

This story is amazing! You write the characters so well, and the relationship was well built! Seeing as the last update was a while ago, you probably aren’t continuing it, but this is friggin amazing!

hope you update soon!

DUDE WE NEED UPDATES LIKE PLS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS!

Where have all the good stories gone? Why has this not been updated? It’s so amazing! It’s been almost two years... where r u?

Also is Jack becoming human?

UPDATE PLEASEEEE! I'M FREAKIN OBSESSED WITH THIS STORY!

This is beautiful and amazing. Can’t wait for more!