Very good work! I wish it was longer! Very original.

This would make an awesome movie or show, I think. It's very well suited to a modern retelling. I wish this could be a full-length novel.

I LOVE this. I was skeptical at first, but your writing is good and the story fits perfectly in modern times. Look forward to more!

Hello thereI just came across your story and I can't believe that no one has left a review yet! I think your idea of a modern setting is brilliant and you've done an exellant job so far! I love 'little Dorrit' and I just recently started looking for FFs, so I'm glad I found a really good one to start with. Thank you for that! Can't wait to read the next chapter