This was so beautiful, it made my heart ache.

I really enjoyed this story. The flow and pacing were just right, and they paired perfectly with your characterisation of Jyn and Cassian. Great job!

This was well done! Thanks for sharing!

Beautiful. I'd love to read more about this version of their lives ;)

This was beautiful and so sad. Definitely going on my favorites list. I think you've done a spectacular job of capturing both Cassian and Jyn's personalities, and it's a very true reflection of what could have happened. Loved Bodhi too and his unwavering care for them both.

And secretly I'm hoping he asks her one day ...

This is fantastic. A beautiful broken fic. I'm very glad I ran into this.

This was amazing in every sense of the word. The style of your writing is awesome, as is the pacing and word choice and the repeated usage of parentheses. You're a great writer; keep it up!

I love it! It was freaking amazing. I mean in a lot of stories that are about action like Star Wars you forget about emotional price of everything and you showed perfectly how hard it can be even if you survive and the price of it. Amazing! And I love that they found some bitter sweet happiness at the end. They will never be whole but they make pretty good job of surviving together! LOVE IT!

Beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

absolutely amazing story made me smile so much thank you for writing it!

Beautifully written

That was superbly done. I don't even have the words really to describe my thoughts. I...I think the best way I can put it, is that you humanized them. You also were able to make angst satisfying without "gratification." I need to go see Rogue One again...

The quote in the beginning brought the whole story together wonderfully! The mixture of dark and light themes made this a nice read, especially the emphasis on survivor's guilt.

Post-traumatic disorders...

nitpick: the name of the planet is "Scarif"