That's a good One-shot right there. I think you did a great job at reflecting how he was feeling about it, since he's probably the most innocent out of all the other characters (but has some inner craziness that shows up time to time).

I liked it, I don't know if this should be left as a One-shot or not, but if you continue with it, I'll surely be pleased to read more.

Good job!

(2) AND HE'S ONLY 18 FOR GOODNESS SAKE. cHild EASE URSELF. *CRI*

Ah my adorable enthusiastic gunslinger son. I love how you portray Calvin's guilt. Being raised in a strict religious household can do that to you. Being overly guilty for every misdeeds.

It hurts when he started to ask if he will be forgiven or if he wipe it clean enough, the sin will go away. Not a childish thinking, more like desperate reasoning to ease his worry. And dang, I just wanna hug him and cry.

He's just a bundle of anxiety with psychopathic tendencies who needs love. Great fic, thanks for sharing!

Very nice. Short, but sweet.

I honestly hadn't thought much about what must've been going through Freckle's head after his "hit-'em-up" spree. You did a really good job at bringing it to light though. Keep up the good writing skills!

Wow! This is a neat fanfic, even though it is short. Calvin/Freckles is my favorite character too.