Reviews for BioTale and UnderShock
MK chapter 1 . 2/23/2019
Well, I won't believe Jack is dead. How about Sans and Jack (being the only survivors of the crash) end up sticking together? They enter the lighthouse, take the bathysphere to Rapture, listen to Atlas, and arrive to the Electro Bolt Plasmid Room, distribute the plasmid for both of them. Big Daddy comes with Little Sister, who is Frisk. Sans and Jack, being disorientated still, don't get to save Frisk. They go through the whole Medical Pavilion. SPOILER ALERT! They find the Big Daddy who protected Frisk, who was that dead one you find near the broken window. They enter the room where you meet Tenenbaum for the first time, with the splicer attacking the Little Sister before getting shot by her.
Sans will try to approach Frisk, but she will try to run. Tenenbaum will give Jack the "Save Little Sister" plasmid, and Sans will watch while Jack Rescues Frisk. Cue the whole game to SPOILER ALERT! entering Fontaine's Lair. Sans, Frisk, and Jack fight all of Fontaine's forms. The Rescued Little Sisters that Jack ends up adopting kill Fontaine, while Sans treats Frisk's wounds. GOOD ENDING of the game where Frisk ends up living with Toriel.
khornite ork chapter 6 . 12/26/2018
dis is sum gud shite 'roit 'ere
bludd fer da bludd godz
Ghost the Fox chapter 8 . 9/23/2017
well I really hope you update this story I really like it it's a new spin after all there was never a genocide Sans
sonicsparkleboom chapter 7 . 6/6/2017
Note and question for you; could you put the story title for each chapter, that way we can read them back to back, and not have to worry about losing track of where either of them are at?
IGotBoredAndChangedMyName chapter 2 . 2/17/2017
but then having sans instead of jack raises the question of how he even got the bathysphere to work in the first place, especially when you consider that ryan put them on lockdown and the only way to bypass said lockdown would be to have a genetic structure similar enough to his to trick it, which only jack did

...then again i'm the one that looked up undertale and bioshock crossovers so i probably deserve this confusion
Emikat chapter 4 . 2/16/2017
SANNNNNS! wait... If sans kills someone... who will judge him if he now has love... ?
Yomon7 chapter 6 . 2/6/2017
I like it.
Anon chapter 10 . 2/2/2017
What about Tenenbaum? And the other girls?
Anon chapter 9 . 1/25/2017
This chapter is the best!
When it comes to Elizabeth though... We saw what became of that poor girl.
I really love Infinite verse! The Luteces should join in too! And don't forget about Tennebaum with the girls.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/24/2017
It couldn't be Chara...
This is really stupid!
The Luteces should do something about this!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/18/2017
Sans should SPARE Cohen in Fort Frolic...
Then he can KILL him at Olympus Heights.
But he should also SPARE Tennebaum, after all she was the only scientist who saw the error of her ways and saved all those girls.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/15/2017
Would you kindly fix this goddamn mess Sans created!
Stop it now! F***ing hell...
It couldn't be Chara...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2017
ok
Guest chapter 4 . 1/11/2017
Please, PLEASE don't let sans kill everyone. It painful enough that Toriel had to die but please NO!
Will sans see any visions from Frisk's past?
Valgreen007 chapter 3 . 1/10/2017
I would like for this story to continue I really liked it
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