This was chilling. The idea of Zarkon stalking Keith across the universe is both terrifying and thought-provoking- though not many of those thoughts are very pleasant.
I wonder why Red did nothing when Zarkon attacked Keith in the hangar? She's been shown to be very protective of him.
I'm not too keen on the whole idea of there being a sexual side to Zarkon's obsession with Keith, but I was glad to see that it didn't play too strongly into this work. Although the undertones were definitely there.

Wow, creepy Zarkon, but so like him! What will happen next?

There must be more to this, Tell me more ! :D

Woah, Zarkon obsession with Keith started creepy then got creepier and it's awesome. You catch his twisted nature so well and his PoV is amazing. I love it. Can't wait to read more.

Damn that was intense I almost couldn't handle it! I can't wait for part 3, you write it so well and I'm really scared for Keith and hunk, please publish the next one soon!