This chptr is beautiful. Cat gave Kara an experience of her family life w/an invitation. How can she keep resisting?

This is too good; the story, style, length...plse let them collide but not yet til they stop being

Love your story line—with Abby and Cat's deep dive being to become softer, etc. Look forward to your story development.

Okay. Sign me on!

Ooooo you are good. Cat 1, K 0. Hope you post soon. Story is wonderfully interesting and nicely paced. I'm still not sure by why K is so tired. Tired of being S/G or tired of not having C around? Did C ? Abby after S/G flew away in front of Carter? Carter must have asked Abby too if he's like his mom. I wish you had S/G stick around and try to convine the little girl otherwise in front of the other Grants. That would have been an interesting scene. Now K have to deal with lying to Carter too. So sad to disillution a kid.