You made the author notes too complicated and it literally killed the feeling that this story might be fun to read. It’s trying to get too technical in my opinion

imo just completely feels like you kinda skipped the whole relationship development thing. At least initially it just kinda immediately went from issei being in love with rias to irina, and losing his feelings for rias. ik you tried to justify it, but it seemed very forced.

not sayin go back and try to fix it or anything, god no, or even try to pull a 180. just be aware that thats a thing that you did, and it might be nice if you delve deeper into remaining feelings for rias, since it doesnt make sense for him to go from loving her to not caring about her without her having any change in character, significant or otherwise really.

Also just a recommendation for the future, remain consistent with power levels. its the fastest fic killer on the planet if your character is all over the place in their power level. Not talkin' about the bael or heaven fight, because despite me not liking the scaling of him being a bit sore and not being able to handle that stuff, its reasonable i guess. Just askin' ya to be careful that you dont put issei, who you've set up to be more powerful than all the faction leaders and their closest kin combined, in a situation where he's gonna lose to anything short of ophis.

3

it started good but became more annoying and senseless every chapter

I've watched too much hentai and porn and now I'm kinda immune to them. So, what I'm trying to say is

WE NEED MORE FLUFFY-FLUFF ROMANTIC MOMENTS! Issei going on a date with Irina, okay. But we also need Issei to go on a date with other cuties as well! But don't end it with just sex. just make fluffy-fluff romantic moments between Issei and other girls.

(ReadMy heart is severely damaged and now I'm traumatized by a certain NTR hentai my friend forced me to watch so I need to heal my heart with fluffy-fluff romantic moments)

thanks for the new chapter i thought you quit but glad to read more of the story thanks

Please continue.

Please add more lemon

Its stupid to exchange the Powers! Dont give Ise any drawbacks! Let him have the Power of Great Red and Ophis and this well not so cool other Dragon God! Ophis destructive Energy could erase everything, its more dangerous than the Power of Destruction! Also first that dumb other Dragon God was younger now it is older than Ophis ?!

Nice Start with the 3rd Arc xD.
Found your story by coincidence, could't read any duo to military work and commissions.
Can say I somehow became Glued more with each chapter, it's a nice change of ways within the multitude of DxD Storys, habe read all so far in a row, could't hell it.

Stay tuned and take your time, I really appreciate your efforts just like (hopefully) everyone else who follows and fav's.

By the way, the old Language of Dragons, is it based by an actual\old language? Just curious if you don't mind me asking, has kinda if nice feeling when spoken.

PM if you habe time and greetings from Germany.
Looking forward to next chapter

That was short lemon i need more
Also welcome back

Awesome update. Love it.

It was a good start and afterward it was a nice way to show what's going on. Good job

A nice little chapter just have a question wo lives with issei at the moment

Question: who lives at his mansion? I can only assume Rias doesn’t.

"grape jam cream cheese toast"

Am I the only one who finds it strange when Japanese characters in fanfictions eat western food even when they are in Japan? I dont know, maybe it bothers me because it gives me an SI feeling (which I hate).