Please continue this. It's a really good start!

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Another unfinish story.

Weak dialogue, plot structure and bad grammar. Lovely.

Update the story! I wanna see more Alex and Rhaegar interactions apparently those two are basically the same. I wanna see them become closer than Ser Arthur Dayne and Rhaegar.

This is sooo sooo good. I love it. I love these stories where Harry is Dayne raised. I think this is my new favorite. Overall you have good grammar and decent spelling. I hope to read more soon.

it's a good start

pretty damn good

Wow great start so far.

This great

Good story, please keep writing!

Loving it! Hope you update it soon enough. Keep up the great work. Cheers!

Pretty good thus far.

Nice start. Wonder how it will affect the canon storyline.

You seemed to backtrack some this chapter on his magic. How could he possibly need to test/practice his wandless spells now as if he never tried them before, when you'd already said he'd done all that in his childhood? And why would stupefy be a 'complicated' spell? Why would aiming be so hard without a wand? Surely he could figure out how to point with his finger?

It kind of comes off like one or more reviewers complained Harry was 'too powerful' so you backtracked and hampered his magic this chapter. Which is kinda silly because he's still/already an immortal 'master of death' but one who knows to keep his magic secret or mostly secret from all others. So he's not going to be running about openly casting at everyone.

Don't rewrite your characters abilities/powers mid-story because someone bitches about power levels. Either he has his magic or not.