Love the story

PLS Continue, it is a good story and has a more original plot with Will on the line and finally Harry not being an exception to cheating death.

Hey! I just wanted to say that I think your story is good and that you should continue if you're inspired, but if it becomes a hassle from all of the haters, don't worry! Don't let them decide what you want to do, and I really like the idea for your story and I'd be interested to see where it goes if you continue. It's awful that there's people that go out of their way to be rude and impose their opinions on other people, and I think you've been handling it well! Even if you don't post anything on a forum, I hope people like that don't spoil your inspiration for writing. Good luck!

Please continue updating. I love this story.

Look, I've got to be honest with you. You're too sensitive towards the negative comments. It seems as though you are ignoring the people who like your story over those who don't. It is important to take criticism from others, but I recommend only taking it to heart if it's constructive. Even then some people are just... trolling you, for lack of better term.
You should continue if you want to. You shouldn't stop just because "Matt" or "Kevin" wants you to.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I quite enjoy it and I would like to see how this progresses. Sorry I'm not the most eloquent of people. Hehe...

Hi! I really like this story! I only have 1 comment. I think that instead of using chapters to post responses to comments, you should make a new story where for every chapter you download on this story you put up one with responses to comments in a different story.

Please keep writing, this is one of my top three fanfics ever written (yes I have a list, don't ask) and it would be a shame if you stopped writing. I'm sure there are a lot of people who love this story, they're just less verbal than the people who don't. And, to anyone who thinks she's torturing Nico, PICK UP ANY BOOK BETWEEN THE TITANS CURSE TO THE BLOOD OF OLYMPUS if you actually read what that boy went through this will seem tame by comparison. Well, that was my piece, PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS I really want to find out what happens and I don't want to be denied that because of some haters with no understanding of the original story/character. Don't listen to these people telling you you're doing this wrong, it's call creative license, that means you can do whatever you want, have fun, if you like it then keep writing.

Sorry for rambling, that happens when I care about something. Please listen to me, you are a great writer and I want to read more by you.

Wow, this is REALLY good. Honestly I haven't read a fanfic this good for a long time now, I hope you're still working on it, I want to know what happens. Just try not to write yourself into a corner, I want to see how you sort this out, but I hope you don't just write in a 'deus ex-macina' and make all his problems disappear without consequence. Well, I'ma keep reading now. I hope you had a happy holidays, and if you didn't, I hope whatever went wrong gets better.

I honestly think this story is amazing. Nico isn't tortured its just how the author wants the story.

This is amazing! So thrilling and full of excitment!

continue story please

Its an alright story, but there seems to be more drama between the author and that Matt fellow than actual story. Its super fast-paced and pretty superficial in term of characters expressing themselves. Love the idea, and am glad i found this fanfic after looking for one about the same sort of thing. Again, short chapters are fine as long as you put meat on them. Its truly a shame you are going to stop writing because of your low selfesteem though. Not to mention you will be proving one of Matt's esrlier points

Please continue the story, I'm curious to see where it goes and am looking forward to updates if you do continue it.

Continue!