| Reviews for Road To A Better Life |
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   Incapacitated Ichthyoid chapter 27 . 8/7 Keep em coming man! |
| Uday Sra chapter 27 . 6/27 Good |
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/26 Finally we get Yang’s route. Still can’t wait for Cinder turn. |
| SomberFlight chapter 27 . 6/26 I just hope that once we find Ruby, there won't be any rape or gore of sorts. Those two are just... yeah. Would be an immediate drop from me. |
| Fyr RedNight chapter 26 . 2/4 You did an awesome and entertaining job with the last chapters. |
| Uday Sra chapter 26 . 2/2 good |
| lilbigstoryteller chapter 26 . 2/2 What an amazing read! The time i have to wait for another chapter is worth it! Keep it up! |
| Uday Sra chapter 25 . 11/24/2019 Awesome |
| Ouroborosdragon chapter 25 . 11/21/2019 Ozpin is a complete hypocrite. He expelled jaune because he forged his transcripts but allowed Blake to stay in, even though she is a former terrorist. I keep bringing up this point in every fanfic that has jaune expelled, terrorism is WAY worse of a crime than forgery. So why have only jaune get the boot and not have Blake expelled as well ? Plus Ozpin already knows about Blake’s past, as it was heavily implied in canon. You would think that Blake’s past with a terrorist organisation would “shatter” his trust in her but nope. Not just Blake but qrow too. Qrow is a former bandit and went to beacon to learn how to kill hunters but he was allowed to become a fricken huntsmen. He’s also a member of oz’s inner circle. So why hasn’t qrow “shattered” his trust? Heck ruby isn’t even supposed to be in beacon yet until two more years. So forgive me if I find ozpin’s reasoning for expelling jaune completely BS. It just feels so frustrating that oz gives special treatment to some characters but screws over jaune for something so small as forging his transcripts. |
| Xealchim chapter 25 . 11/20/2019 Dammit Oz lived |
| decodelifehacker chapter 24 . 11/14/2019 Keep going with this story |
| IHateGenericCereal chapter 24 . 10/28/2019 Never been a fan of the whole killing thing, but it is an important thing as a mercenary I guess. I just hope he doesn't suddenly go gung ho with it like a lot of stories end up doing. Good stuff so far, hope to see more. |
| EiNyx chapter 24 . 7/17/2019 Add an OC tag to your story. This is starting to look like Michael's story. |
| Crankymcgranky chapter 23 . 6/24/2019 This fic has a really good premise and solid writing. This is literally one of the biggest what-if questions I had about the show brought to light. I really like your OC in Michael as well, in fact one of the few OCs I enjoy in Fanfiction Thank you so much for writing this, and I hope you have the motivation to continue this story. Cheers, A dedicated reader |
| SkiesofPaint chapter 23 . 6/20/2019 Fantastic work. Can’t wait for your continuation |
