First story was a bit better. More of a zombie history than a personal narrative. Readable.

i like this story.
:D

She seems a bit full of herself

I hope for more! Excellent writing that feels rightout of the book, well done :)

I really enjoyed reading this being british myself and an avid military enthusiast. I would love it if you created more british military based fan fiction about wwz including issues like the relative size of our armed forces and also if you wrote about certain campaigns during the liberation period or the defence of the antonine line.

Brilliant piece of writing this and I hope to see more

Bloody brilliant mate! Could have been taken out of the book itself! Keep it up!

I'm glad and pleasantly surprised that you kept going with this. This is really well written. Definitely not as cynical as Max Brook's writing, but it still fits.

Nice job!

Hey, this is pretty good! I'm definitely waiting for the next chapter, keep up the good work! :D