| Reviews for The Falling Star |
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   Zimzimgar chapter 12 . 7/18 Ok. I just binge read the entire thing up to this point, and man is it good. She really fits into this setting with her lighthearted character that can instantly change if you make a wrong move. And I will continue to read this until I am finished. Just thought that the end of Marineford was a good point to say this. |
| tjanjua115 chapter 1 . 7/10 I literally couldn't even get through the first half of the first chapter because of the trash grammar. Ffs, the first 3 paragraphs are literally the same thing but written in slightly different ways. |
| Lord Metallex chapter 3 . 7/8 Seriously? Why do people always seems to think anything from Yggdrasil can curbstupe almost any universe! This is Utterly insulting to fans of the other franchise. If your going to do a crossover. At least try and make more equal. It can be simple as this Yonkos and Admirals could be 100 or above, and marine captains could be between 50-60. By doing this, you can set guidelines for who the character can easily defeat and those they would have to put everything they have to beat the enemy. |
| PoofyOhio chapter 6 . 5/30 Interesting idea, but it’s so poorly written that it’s almost unbearable to read. Probably gonna stop here, ‘Twas fun while it lasted. |
| doubledamn chapter 2 . 5/19 Wait, I just looked at your profile, is this a spin off of your Overlordly Broken fic? |
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 5/19 It doesn't seem to be Albedo, but if it was, I am very glad that the Marine Vice Admiral Momonga wasn't on base during her entrance. |
| starscreamer11 chapter 16 . 5/17 Damn wheres chapter 17? Its been a year already! I need moar pleeeaaassseeee |
| zakan chapter 16 . 5/7 Please, tell me this wonderful story is not dead |
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/19 Did u gonna update this or simply abandon this story, its accualy a good story, hopefully you update it. |
| Slimesam chapter 16 . 3/15 It already been a year already my thirst for update is almost in the brick of rage for waiting. With this clamity going on this 2020 I am not sure your still safe author. But I am hopefull that your safe and able to update this master piece. |
| Christian Goh chapter 2 . 2/26 wonder if the author will ever do a overlord RWBY fanfic |
| The Watcher chapter 4 . 2/23 Her bounty should be at least 2 billion for defeating the Admirals and Sengoku |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24 Wtf is this shit nigga? |
| Starlord Master chapter 16 . 1/24 Poor guy. |
| IamOminous chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 you need a beta reader yesterday. |
