Ah, and the weebery begins.

You must have quite a budget if that house is "smallish". I'd sure want more than 2 commodes for the number of people who might potentially make use of 5 to 7 bedrooms.
My pathetically small place only has 4 bedrooms and a study, and we have 2 full baths and a "powder room".

A fully-furnished house with 5-bedrooms, 2 bonus bedrooms/study rooms with a den (would that be a family room in England? I don't know...) in the SURREY - for 100K? Yah. Big, neon nope. I'm thinking that you meant to tack another zero onto that price. Gotta do a little homework, BUT...
you were probably just a kid when you wrote this, from the "voice" used. You probably had enough homework already.

BTW, Menolly showed up? Guess she dumped Sebell. (How disappointing for her. He seemed like such a nice guy, too, really into her...)
Surely, she was awarded custody of the firelizards? Meh, she's the one who Impressed 'em. To heck with him.
They'd flip Seb the wing and "between" right out of there.

It was stupid of them to chose the names Peter and James. Why would they chose Peter, anyway? What they did to Snape was mean. No wonder Snape still hates them.

Try spaces between your paragraphs it’s barely readable

You have some truly excellent ideas and some unique plot twists that I am enjoying. However, your English skills need some strict attention. One cat: cat. More than one cat: cats (NOT cat's). One Potter: Potter. More than one Potter: Potters (NOT Potter's). There are NO apostrophes in pluralizations. This is Primary School English you need to review. Belonging to one Potter: Potter's. Belonging to more than one Potter: Potters' (or Potters's). The possessive requires an apostrophe (with a few exceptions: his, hers, ours and theirs). ‘Athletes speed’ means something very different to ‘athlete’s speed’.

Not only do you not know how to use an apostrophe, you can apparently not differentiate between homonyms; their/there/they're, to/too/two, past/passed and your/you're are just a few you have regularly misused. You need to look up, and understand, the definitions of these words.

Keep writing! You can greatly improve your readability by paying more attention to every word you type. Although your grammar needs a lot of work, your characters and plot are intriguing and I look forward to seeing where you take them.

Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.

Great start! Maybe even one I haven't read yet! Looks quite promising; at least Sirius is around! He is one of my favorite characters!

good story

I’m nearing the end of this story and sadly growing bored. There seems to be a lot of filler information, which is interesting to know, but is unnecessary to the story and it just causes my mind to wander. Don’t get me wrong, I’m enjoying the story, but it taking entirely too long for Harry to defeat Voldemort. I think I’m going to have to take a break from this story before I try to finish it.

Good chapter.

Good idea for a story!

I didn’t notice anyone had already said this so I’ll be the first. Blaise Zabini is a guy in canon. Not sure if you meant to genderbend him or not. Also you /need/ to put a major char death warning up with this. I absolutely won’t read Harry Dies perm stories and avoid them so now I’m unhappy.

Arithmancy is the other subject lol a little late but here ya go lol

Nice way for him to reveal himself to the world again bet that stirs up some things.

Ok wondering who this mister guy is and why Harry fainted...?

Not nice But i hope he survives this.