If it were me in this scenario I'd personally want to see if there was some way to imbue protection on those who you care about as Friends- example, Totosai

What if Inuyasha DOES find out that Kagome is alive and Totosai knew? knowing him (In this story at least) he might go after him and attack

If only there was a charm or something I could imbue with protection for a friend and give to totosai which would alert me if he needed help as well. that's just me though, I worry about friends and family.

Betrayal like that shpuld not be forgotten..

Sesshomaru's a Chippendale, 'eh? His mating dance for Kagome was awesome!

I have enjoyed reading this but I wish there was more

Fantastic Story! .

Her eyes were already blue in the manga

I like the plot but so far everything's moving so quickly, and just because her family didn't believer her she's going to abandon them? She didn't even try to talk to them I think that was a bit much. They also wouldn't just fall inlove in like a few days, there should be a lot more growth going on I do love the idea and the plot but maybe try to slow everything down to the reality of the characters

Hahaha that last paragraph! All I can picture is a mischevious seshomaru grin and him disappearing in glee. This was great!

Hi Serena530,

I've been looking for the added one-shot. Though, I can't locate it on your fanfiction page. Can you email me or something to inform me of its location, please?

I really love your story and look forward to seeing your next one-shot.

Thanks for writing,

OOOOO What happened between inuyasha and Sesshomaru?

So I am subscribed to you and get updates whenever you post. I usually read your sailor moon stuff because your take on that series is super original and refreshing. Today as I was lying on the beach at my home in Matsue, Japan, I decided to take a chance on your inuyasha stuff as well. I was not disappointed. Your creative approach to these characters gives them a strength and power that is often lacking in the original series. So now I am going to go through and read all your Inuyasha fics just like I read all your Sailor Moon works. Thanks for the great content! Keep it up!

-Dani3

well that was a bummer good story. just wish it was... more.

i love this story but i think u need a beta reader to help out bcuz i have questions for all d missing plots of the story. Please update tho

What about Shippo?

As much as I like the story and the plot, this is so rushed. Theres hardly any development before we move on to the nex big thing. She is betrayed and changed and then bam cuddling up with Sessh not to mention killing within the first like 20 mins of being pheonix. A second ago she was so pure she was saved by the Kamis. In saying all that I really love the plot of the story and that the Kamis have turned her into this amazing celestial being. Maybe if it was just a little slower and had more time to develop I could enjoy it so much more. Like maybe if she trained for a week to really get a feel for herself even if she is confident the entire week instead of just bam 1 hour im perfect. I loved Kags as a pure Pheonix and it was very clever but too rushed for me sorry xx