This story has potential you have to update it soon please I am loving this story.

I don't know how I got here ...
But I love your story so bad I want an account and put it In favorite. Maybe I do it later.
I love the idea too. It's so ... cool?
Sorry I don't have enough vocabulary for this..
One thing for sure I love this fix. ;)

Oh sugar honey iced tea,it's the *sshole may be a villain but *sshole Watts far more of a bad guy than she is (I assure u this is not because I have a thing for sexy villains)

I like the idea of Whitley murdering Jacques and taking over the SDC, though I feel like Weiss is a little more okay with it than she should be. I also feel like the Whitley we've seen would be a little more sinister and cruel than this, but that's just me. But this is good. Dark, but good.

I feel like this is the best outcome possible in the show.

I freaking WISH this would happen to Jacqass! This was a fun read!

This... Isn't all that bad, I kinda want a second part to this.
Bravo, great short story pal.

Is it wrong of me to want this to happen? It seems wrong of me somehow...but Jacques soooo deserves this!

THIS IS WUT I NEED AFTER EP 6 AND 7

Whitley as a sick bastard always amuse me, really. But this is a whole new level for me. Better tread your steps right, Weiss, this icy little snake surely have something sinister for everyone.

All in all, I'm glad to have someone exploring possibility of twisted story of Schnee family.

This has promise, it could be a great story, good work

I like where this is going and how you put good guy twist on Whitley's seemingly suspicious behavior. Keep it up and I look forward to see where this is going because it does have potential.