Both versions are good.

I love both versions, but can't be the end surely...

Ooh I loved this version! Thanks for sharing :-)

Thanks for the fantastic double treat on New Year too!
Although I already liked the first version very much, I think I have a slight preference for the second version. Beautiful, the way Harry gave him 'the jump start he seemed to need.' She was definitely right about it. He can't bear the thought of her with another man.
And what a great building of their relationship in this chapter! Very true to their character.
Btw, now the hustle and bustle of the holidays are a bit behind us, I'm all set for round number three. ;-)

Loved this version, hope there is more and this isn't really the end.

Wow! That's some opening chapter! Amazing! :-)

Thanks for this two versions of a beautiful story!

This one is a stunner. Not sure which version I like best but I definitely like the fact that you offer your readers both versions. It is not "The end." however, is it? That's too much like the end of the series, with viewers left wondering where they went from where they were. As long as you keep writing newer versions and different stories with these characters your readers will continue to follow because you do them so well.

That was unexpected for sure! I'm loving it! Please keep going and thanks so much for sharing!

Double treat for Christmas? OMG, what a great start of a new story!
I'm a bit confused, though. This is a totally different story, no? Will there also be a sequel to 'Partners'? Not that I don't appreciate this new story. Quite the contrary actually, because I'm already curious for more! How about a double treat for New Year too? :-))

What a lovely surprise Christmas present!. Can't wait to read more.

What a boxing day treat! Thank you for posting. You've covered so much ground very quickly. I guess it reflects how fast their relationship is progressing...finally. Can't wait to see where this story goes. Happy Christmas x

What a great gift on the day after Christmas! This is an entirely new story and a very fast-paced one. You covered a lot of territory in this one chapter. It will be interesting to see how you develop this. Really looking forward to the next chapter. You really have the characters' differences exactly as they were presented on the television screen and that is what makes this story unique.