This is good, really. Interesting, and the mc is a female as a plus. Kinda disappointed with the skill that she choose. I think she choose too many, like a jack of all. I was hoping she focus on a few specialit, no need to know it all.
anyway, hurry up update!

damn, kinda disappointed that they not together until Laguetown. I mean, they will parted away in the end, so let them journey together until Laguetown!

Love it wish you can continue

Bruhhhh, she really isn't becoming a devil fruit user? That's sad. Reason I think this is cause she chose swimming.

Well, it seems as thought you created an awesome system for the main character, too bad she choose the most retarded things posible from it. Says a lot about the authors intelligence

Did the Siren get her peregnant?

But the question is what caused it to fossilize?

Very enjoyable read, looking forward to more

Dear god, i hope this character isn't based off of you because you had the choice to make someone awesome and instead you made them lame.

Great chapter can't wait to find out what happens next

Jasmine cover art looks awesome, also nice to see her crew really starting to come together.

nice chapter thx for writing it
yay for new crew members and getting a chef always handy those
will be fun to see there adventure in sealsburg

great job on this chapter and welcome back :)

This is a pretty good story and I like the way you had the game she is in set up. I would like to see where this goes.

please invest in smaller paragraphs and proper punctuation. the story and premise itself is very good, but some the technical aspects need some work