Nice

I agree with Himaru's review. I really enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work!

GAHHHH! I LOVE THIS STORY, IT WAS SO SWEET I ALMOST CRIED.

This was a really bittersweet and we'll written one-shot. I wish something like this had happened cannonly to have given both Ryou and the Theif king a little closure, as they both seemed to have gotten the worst hands dealt to them. It is never really said what happened to Theif King Bakura but i hope it is similar to what you wrote here

Nice story