Reviews for Mon Amour
Rainlight2427 chapter 8 . 2/27/2018
ABDERJABDERYELLAKINT

MY SHIP

MY SHIP

OH NO MY SHIP

LAURENETTE

MY POOR, POOR, JEANETTE

SHE GOT MARRIED

NOOOOOOOO

Please forgive my frantic, shocked, all-caps spiel about Laurenette. It was, alas, short-lived. Perhaps it'll go on somehow?

Anyway, YOU UPDATED YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON, THANK YOU SO MUCH, I'M SO HAPPY.

I loved the letters! And, oh my gosh, Alexander is a hypocritical little son of a biscuit. I'm glad Laf is there for Genevieve. Ahehheheheh I ship them so, so much.

Like Laurenette. (I'm so sorry I keep going on about it...)

This chapter was a mix of YAS, LAFAVIEVE, and NOOOOOO, MY LAURENETTE.

Poor Laurens sounds so distraught, and confused, and desperate...Any chance that we humble readers will be able to glimpse Jeanette's response? Waitaminute is her husband a loyalist?

iS hE?

Oh no, he is, isn't he...

Well, this has been an emotional roller-coaster, thanks for listening.

Looking forward to the next update (and keeping my fingers crossed for a Laurenette recovery!)

(Also, fun fact, my sister's birthday is September 15, the same date Laurens wrote his letter, sorry, random facts are spewing everywhere from my head, I'll show myself out, sorry about my disjointed review)
kixotical chapter 7 . 1/18/2018
Can you please update? Just saying it's been a while and I really like this story...
AND PEGGY chapter 7 . 10/27/2017
omg I love fanfictions with oc's! Also, could you somhow get the shuyler sisters involved? that would be cool! Keep writing!
kixotical chapter 6 . 10/26/2017
Thank you for providing the summary, I'm black and I'm a bit sensitive to that kind of stuff.
But SQUEEEEEEEEEE ALEX AND GENEVIEVE HOOKED UP ALEXEVE IS NOW A THING TOO (or is it Genevex...)
Either way, super cool! And I loved Lafayette's love letter!
kixotical chapter 5 . 10/22/2017
Kay, first things first, props to Jeanette for manging to evade James like that and maintain her virginity, I applaud you for that
Also, that kiss was ADORABLE! Genevette is now a thing
kixotical chapter 4 . 10/22/2017
NOOOOOO JEANETTE WHAT HAPPENED TO SINGLE PRINGLE FOR LIFE?
Also, for some reason I have this weird feeling that Jeanette is a lesbian...it's probably wrong but I can't help feeling like that
Rainlight2427 chapter 7 . 10/21/2017
YES, YOU UPDATED!

I've been waiting, my friend, and I'm so happy :)))

Anyway, I've read about the Lafayette/La Fayette thing, too, and I'm pretty sure that Lafayette is just an English (or American, lol) way of spelling of the name. Fun fact: La Fayette (the French spelling) apparently means "the fairy", which kinda makes sense—the older way of spelling fairy in English is "faery", so you can sorta see the linguistic link between the two. So Laf is basically a fairy. Weird, right?

Anyway, the bottom line is that since this fic is in English, people shouldn't call you out on that, unless they are a serious pedant.

On another note, I love how Genevieve's and Laf's relationship is progressing...Is it bad that I ship her and Laf more than I ship her and Hamilton? As much as I love Genevieve, I still ship Hamliza fervently...Also, Laf is such a gentleman to her, and I love it, especially since she went through that crap with Matthews. Aaaah, just tell him about Alex, Genevieve! You can do it!

Also, LAURENETTE! YOU LISTENED! THANK YOU! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY THAT MADE ME! I'm excited to see more!

Anyway, thanks for updating, look forward to next chapter, et cetera, et cetera.

Rainlight, out.
kixotical chapter 3 . 10/21/2017
Holy crap this chapter had a dark edge...first the mention of Genevieve becoming topless...and then the fact that she was raped...damn...
kixotical chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
Okay, for the record, Jeanette is like, the BEST feminist to walk this planet. SINGLE PRINGLE FOR LIFE!
Also, James seems like an arrogant dick. F him.
And Michelyne? Lord help me she's too innocent the overexposure to pure cuteness will be the death of me.
But Genevieve? She's my favorite salty pringle :3
kixotical chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Awesome! Love the cover art by the way!
Guest2 chapter 6 . 6/23/2017
This is the same guest who accused you of plagiarism. I want to apologize. I really am sorry about the misunderstanding, don't let what I said keep you from writing. Please. I sincerely apologize and hope you continue this story for people who enjoy reading it.
A.Burrn chapter 6 . 6/23/2017
Hi! I really love this story! Keep up the great work. And regarding the guest review, don't listen to them. I honestly think both stories are equally good no matter the coincidence. Keep it up!
OneLoneStar chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
Okay, to the Anon that was accusing AmaterasuOfTheSun of plagiarism, please check your facts before accusing. Are you aware that AmaterasuOfTheSun posted this story on December 24, 2016? The other fic you speak of, Soldier by Whistling Willows, was posted on March 16th of this year. You know how to do math right? Mon Amour was posted 2 months, 3 weeks, and 2 days BEFORE that one. So if anyone should be changing OC to "Taken Character", it should be with the other story, assuming that Whistling Willows copied Genevieve/Lafayette from here. Whistling Willows, if you did not plagiarize and your main character's name is a coincidence, I apologize. I am also not accusing you of anything right now either, I am trying to teach an idiot a lesson. So please Anon, before you waste your reviews making stupid assumptions, fact-check key things. It will get you far in life.
The Silvernote chapter 6 . 6/22/2017
Aw I loved this Genney is great! I love her. Also Alex was a cheeky little shit in this chapter XD can't wait for the next!
Guest chapter 6 . 6/22/2017
Um OC stands for original character. You know that right? Well there's another story with the same main character shipped with Lafayette. Maybe you should change the OC part in your summary to TC. (TAKEN character) :/
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