Aww, I usually don't like OCs but I really like yours. And oh, the cover! The picture of Lucy! It's so beautiful. Where did you get it? And her face... It looks like it's full of a great light shining from the inside! Lucy has a pretty, eternal beauy to her, and it comes from the inside out. Your picture just illustrates that perfectly so we can all see it! The cover alone was worth my time here. Of course, your story is also worth it, too...

This first time I ever read a romance about Lucy that like, her and Darreth are really cute together. Great job:)

Good job.

I just realized that this tab was still open on my browser...then I realized that this was actually the very first of your stories that I ever read. Have I ever mentioned that you have a natural, God-given gift for writing? Wonderful, cute little story. Aaaand...no further comment shall I make. :)

Oh, please, write a full-length fic with them next! They're so cute!

I love this! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! IT'S SO CUTE I COULD DIE!

*swoons* YES! It's about time!

Love the tie-in with Traitor's Game. Can't wait for Edmund to get home to the news. :D

Aww, Darreth and Lucy are so squee together! *happy sigh* *melts into a pool of sparkling pink goo*

I can't wait to see more of them! :D

Yay! Darreth! That was charming! I presume this is about the time when Traitor's Game starts? Or am I off? :-)

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! I'm the crazy reviewer who writes in caps and loves Lucy/Darreth and Oreius/Demetris.

Excuse me whilst I just flop into a mass of bubbly happiness... this was perfectly done. The Peter muse inside of me is fighting the urge to fight a duel for Lu's honour... but that aside, I loved it! 3 Lucy deserves to be happy, and I'm glad she found that with Darrith. -chants- more, please, more! :D

Finally! A new story! I'm definitely more than intrigued! I'm looking forwards to your next update, I hope I won't have to wait too long ;)

I've always been an Edmund girl, I hope you've ultimately got happiness in store for him as well! Keep up the excellent work as always!

YAY! Love Lucy/Darreth!

Merry (belated) Christmas! This is an interesting beginning and I look forward to the more that is coming! :)

Wow, what a great beginning of anaother lovely story! I love this couple! Please update soon.
Merry Christmas to you as well!

Thank you for this. I couldn't ask for a better Christmas present.

Hear, hear! Good to see you writing again. But, an important question: I'm making a Narnia OC myself, a Mouse named Queepicheet, and I have no idea how to write him without making him a rip-off of his Chief Mouse, since Reepicheep is the best example of a Mouse that we have from canon.