I have really enjoyed the story so far. Story has good pacing, keeps you interested. I enjoyed seeing the relationship between Han and Leia grow.I have enjoyed seeing Leia let her guard down and be a little and be a little "playful" with Han. I especially Liked having the story told from Chewy's point of view(in this chapter). I can definitely Imagine him calling Han honor brother and Luke Little Jedi.

we have learned a lot but not all! Your pacing of this is so controlled and disciplined. This was a heck of a chapter. Thank you!

This is a great fic. Looking forward to the next instalment.

PS Know nothing about Sailor Moon or X-Men.

I was so happy to see that you updated this!

Great chapter full of lots of action and plot development... can’t wait to see where you’ll be taking this crossover!

Oh my goodness this was a wonderful update! It was a long wait but it was so well worth it!

I’m so glad you haven’t given up on the story, and I’m looking forward to the next chapter!

Oxo

Holding my breath here until the next chapter.
As always, your attention to detail and the mystery is fantastically plotted. Plus I enjoy the little gestures and observations Leia, Luke and Han make about each other.
Thank you for a quality story

Okay. I'm caught up before I launch into your last chance.
I love the way you completely change the way you write for each character's perspective.

This is a damn fine fic.

Oh, I'm so glad I started reading this. This is damn good. Love the subtlety in the H/L relationship.
Great and realistic dynamic between the main 3. I could see their dinner.
And loved hope Han cut the dinner short.

I love this story! You have the characters sooo on-point. I know real life gets in the way but I’ll never give up hope of you finishing it xx

I just realized thanks to your great writing that R2 is the droid version of Han...brave, reckless and smart-mouthed!

This chapter had me hooked! So much going on! And now they're actually closer to the temple... but there are no more published chapters! No pressure, but just know that I'm looking forward to what comes next :)
Also, kudos to your Threepio PoV section, you did an amazing job with it.

I particularly enjoyed about this chapter that you showed us the light tension between Luke and Leia about her refusal to become a Jedi - but also that Luke is beginning to understand it and accept it. I also loved Chewie's saying!

Oooh that was such a good display of Leia the Leader! I loved how she encourages people to share what they have to say even if she's not going to agree with them, and how she talks about Alderaan. That was an interesting and fitting choice, to have Leia explain why Alderaanian isn't necessarily a pacifist planet if that just means being passive against injustice.

Great scene with Luke, too. You got Obi-Wan so well, giving him just enough information but not more than that because he knows that will just distract Luke from what he needs to focus on right now. I loved how he explores Leia's Force presence and notices Han there. That was a great visual!

I really liked the touch of having Leia stubbornly refusing to strap in because she wanted to be there, and falling when Han needs to do a quick step - it just added some tension and realism to the scene. Also loved how frustrated Han is with himself even though it's not his fault, just because he knows how important this mission is for Leia and doesn't want to fuck up. His taking it out with others felt in character. I loved that Leia came up with a plan to let him cool off and get some rest while they got organized again. I have to say that I'm a tiny bit confused by the plan, like I'm not getting the whole thing about the transponders and the transfers, but I probably should re-read that, lol!

Happy birthday! Hope you're having a lovely day! Here's another review, since I read one and a half chapters yesterday and the same today :D

Amazing insight about Leia from Luke. I really liked how he thinks about Han being the first who saw through her "masks", and how Luke got to know more of the real Leia after Jabba's. I also really enjoyed his thoughts on how important the droids are in his life, and his fondness of Threepio.
That was one hell of an astronomy lesson! I don't know if it's real or not, but you put *so* much thought into it, it was convincing. And more importantly, I loved that it led to Han being so thoughtful and telling Leia how much the loss of Alderaan affected the whole galaxy.
It was lovely to see Han defering to Leia and vice versa, and how much they count on and support each other.
Excited to see where this leads!