This is lovely!

Well. All of this was absoutely lovely!

SO well done.

I'm not sure if you take requests but if so is there anyway you could write the final scene from 3x11 Going Home in Emma's POV? From when Regina tells her she has to take Henry to when she crosses the town line losing her memories?

I've looked all over fanfiction for a good written version of this scene and I'm a little shocked to find there are hardly any. It's such an emotional important scene!

Anyway if you can that would be lovely

Lovely conclusion. Killian had to ask if she would run, he had to be sure. So she promised not to run. This was very nice, thanks for writing.

Canon Expansion it is then, this is a lot of fun. Emma's POV is an enhancement to the original and the fact that she is reflecting in her relationship with Killian is wonderful.

My only regret, and it's not this story, is that when they are in Rumple's vault, when she thinks of her magic, she remembers something Neal said about home. Who needed Neal then? Not us, but anyway...looking forward to the next chapter.

Lovely ending! I love that Emma went off with him after the party instead of being interrupted by the next drama in Storybrooke.

Lovely ending, full of tenderness. I particularly love when Killian asked her to not run away, they were both vulnerable in this moment and it's beautiful.

I enjoyed your story. All the looks into what they were thinking and Emma promising not to run - great additions to canon.

Season 3 is one of my favorite parts of OUAT so super excited about this! :)

I really like how you show that the dance at the ball gave Killian hope and that he spend all this time with hope but also fear that Emma take a step back and shut him done, and that he lets her take the lead but is capable of "forcing" her watching and admitting the truth abuot her feelings for her parents and her magic. I thuink it represents him very well.

Awesome chapter! Absolutely perfect!

Well, this ending is a nice twist. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Love how you write Emma's thoughts and feelings during this time travel, particularly her reaction to past Hook and how she slowly starts to accept her feelings for Killian. The last lines during their dance were perfect.

I love the line about the rum, "I can carry it right out the door". We wonder how past Hook would have been different in bed. Emma definitely is curious. Looking forward to the rest.

We knew she would run after sex. And Hook would blame himself for being weak. He will be patient and she will come back to him when she accepts how she feels. In the meantime, they are taking a trip through time!

This is very good. The perspective of Killian trying to bring Emma back to Storybrooke and a lot of extras and its very good.