Reviews for Christmas on Platform 12
kfulmer7 chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
Great story! Love it! Very cute too. Thanks for writing! Karen
VitsAsh chapter 1 . 6/30/2017
Beautiful! I really loved it..
delenalu chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
Sorry about my tardiness, but it fits somehow with the topic, isn't it? :)

You demonstrated many times that you who have the narrative force of building something big in your multi chaptered stories whose plot line evolves in time, developed organically, but the fact that you managed to do it in an one shot too, this really is a performance.

The paradox is... in such a condensed way you still had the time to tell us not only the story itself, which is a slice of their lives, but also to suggest that your characters are not some artificial individuals, suspended in the moment, but they have a history, they come from somewhere and mainly they go somewhere. Together. :) By the way, what a beautiful ending!
sauriemilia chapter 1 . 1/8/2017
I loved this so much! I stopped watching the show after season 3 so I was away from all things Delena for a while. When I saw the tweet for the exchange I realized how much I missed these two. Ive always loved how you capture them and your writing is stunning as usual. Thank you so much for choosing my prompt Im so happy it inspired sush and amazing story. Happy belated holidays!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2017
I liked it this was very cute
Danni1989 chapter 1 . 1/1/2017
This was absolutely terrific. I wanted to do this prompt but I'm running out of time to accomplish anymore. I loved every word you wrote.
Rag Doll 59 chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
Lovely little story. Happy New Year.
Lizzy chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
LOVING IT! Great read!
Steph2013 chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
I love Christmas onshots with Delena, theirs always fun, and their awesome convos at the station where really sweet,awesome as always. Belated Merry Christmas!.
DontSayno chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
Great story!
The Goonies chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
Very nice. Thank you and Merry Christmas.
aj81writing chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
Wow, so lovely. Had me tearing up, too. Thank you for sharing!
Imarifirst chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
Sad cause her father is going to be passing on soon , but it would have nice if they got married Judy so he could walk her the down the aisle , who knows maybe he sees where this is going and he hangs on just to see it happened especially when Damon ask him for her hand in marriage , happy holidays ,Peacex
tamilnadu09 chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
the tidbit about making a wish when a necklace is twisted is a cool idea!
morvamp chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
That ending! Such a cute question to end such a fluffy O/S. You really captured the depth of Elena's sadness in the beginning and although I thought her mother was harsh, I understand her side. The little pieces of the movie and the necklace made this feel 'real', since you gave the characters depth and their own little quirks. And having that miracle come true was just the icing on the cake.

I loved this and I love you!

Merry Christmas, superest life coach.
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