| Reviews for The Devil's First Christmas |
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   immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 5 . 4/23 Love Gabriel. I'm betting you copied the personality from the version on Supernatural, right? |
| mendenbar chapter 4 . 1/15 I have sung Night of Silence at Christmas many, many times and I absolutely love it. Not many people are familiar with it, so thank you for putting it here. |
| EvilRegalandJCapper4Life chapter 5 . 6/4/2018 I LOVED THIS FIC SO MUCH! The only thing that I did not like at all was...how you put some things in *these things.* It was off putting. Why not just write the action out in a sentence? Besides that it was a great fic! Well done! I did honestly love it. P.S. I feel like I'm the only one that ships Maze and Linda. Lol. Random thought. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/9/2018 Piiiiiishhhhhh I thought this was magnificent ' that last chapter as well ' you're too harsh on yourself gurl! Xoxox |
| Madhatter1981 chapter 3 . 12/9/2017 I don't know exactly why, perhaps my upbringing, but the fact the Lucifer gets his grace back while having sex with Chole, always slightly annoys me. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2017 You’re doing an amazing job. I have to go so I can read next chapter. From Lillip. Køge. Denmark. |
| SnapDragon318 chapter 5 . 8/8/2017 I loved it! All of it! |
| Ucana chapter 1 . 8/2/2017 I think it's absolutely amazing what you wrote here! The characters are saying things, which I really believe they could say. So, good job! :) |
| deborah.beatty chapter 4 . 7/10/2017 OMG! This was awesome. Loved the family fight scene. After all, what else do families do when they get together for holidays? And just like any family, when it gets out of hand, someone has to cry enough then Everything's fine. Loved the snowball fight. Loved that Chloe heals Lucifer in addition to making him mortal. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2017 Fantastic! Remember to mark this as complete, though. I always filter to only see complete stories, so I only found this one because I saw the one shot alternate ending and decided to check out your profile. |
| Debbydq chapter 5 . 7/6/2017 this story was great! I was honored to read it all the way through |
| SomeoneAnonymous123 chapter 5 . 6/15/2017 Thank you for considering our choices! My choice is you post it anyway, cause no matter what, i bet I'd love it! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/14/2017 I'm sure it is well written. Post it with the story. |
| Crystalyna du Starrvan chapter 5 . 6/14/2017 If you are not happy with the way your original epilogue was written, definitely try writing another one-I know what it's like to not have an ending that doesn't quite mesh-and it's better to re-write it to something you're more happier with |
| josephaustin18 chapter 4 . 2/23/2017 this was a great chapter |
