Are you okay? You are probably busy with life or something and thats totally cool, do whats best for you! I just want you to know that I have kinda been in love with this story since 2018 and idk i just dont see how writing this good could just stop unless something happened. Anyways, heres to hoping for another chapter sooner or later. I hope you are well and living life to the fullest, i just couldn’t help but worry. Take it easy.

-LegacyOfBacchus

I mean holy shit. The moment I've been waiting to for 49 chapters finally happened and then bam and mercy opened his fucking mouth and it was ruined. I mean damn, you've left me speechless, you're that good of a writer. BUT I swear to God, percabeth better happen, I've invested to much time to be left like this. Anyway great chapter can't wait till the next one!

Hey I just binge read all 49 chapters and it’s really darn good. At first I was like ehhhh but it got better with each chapter. Dare I say I’m... hooked. :P hopefully you eventually get Percy and Annabeth together unless you intend to continue to torture your readers. You’re doing good stuff man! Keep it up

Oh thank goodness that chapter gave me somewhat a breath of relief. I get what you mean by notes becoming a mess and causbg a WTF plot. Try leaving stories behind for a couple years and then returning to the messy notes and trying to understand what the he'll you were thinking. It's basically impossible — you have to reconstruct the story entirely. Thank goodness neither Nico nor Thalia wnt through with it though.

Annabeth and Percy's relationship... Yikes. That's completely true though how going with Derek was not just the easy way out, but a sort of answer. Because it didn't matter whether or not she loved Percy right there and then, she still left with Derek. So her feelings for him were obviously stronger than her feelings for Percy — if she had any for him at all (in the eyes of Percy at least). I'm glad they've somewhat reconciliated, but I expect it's probably kinda one sided in that Percy wants to be "just friends" more than Annabeth now.

The vacation may be to strengthen bonds, but I think more than anything the group as a whole needs to sort out the issues betweeen individuals — and that seemed to be what this chapter was about.

Sorry to hear about your dog. Dogs are truly man's best friend and it sucks to lose such a friend who oftentimes stays with you right from when they're pups all the way to old age.

I can't wait to read the next chapter. It's absolutely fine to focus less on Annabeth and Percy or Nico and Thalia — they've kinda been dominating the story (granted they are the main characters). Even when Frank, Hazel and the rest talk half the time it's about Percy or Annabeth. So yeah it would be interesting to hear more of other stuff going on.

Honestly you're right about the PoV thing — it probably does switch too many times, although it does generally seem to be consistent to themes. I myself try to limit myself to one PoV per chapter, at very very most 2. This can vary from story to story (I don't think one would be near enough on a story like this though. It's up to yu how you deal with PoVs though.

...I'm getting hella tired so I'm gonna stop typing before I write something nonsensical.

Hey, so I enjoyed the chapter like I always do, but I was wondering when you were gonna end the story... I mean, after someone tells someone no like that I'm pretty sure all hope is lost and you just can't be hooked anymore.
Sorry about that... once again I loved the chapter (For the most part)

before I rant I will say I FINISHED MY HOMEWORK YAY... Lol... now it’s rant time

ANNABETH ANNNNABETHHHH UGHHHHHHH like gurl Annabeth is a queen but in this story I just don’t like her with Percy. Idk. Also Endgame is coming out and I AM DYING CANT WAIT TO WATCH ITTTT YASSS. Nvm that but I like the moment with Percy and Annabeth like Percy knows what he wants now which makes me happy. All the relationships in this story is soooo GOOODDDD like child... I did start writing a book.. it’s not fan fiction but I have wrote SOME fanfics that I have not finished... which is what I hate abt my writing. Your writing is amazing and lately I haven’t found THAT many good fanfics sooooooooo I started rereading Hooked. And coincidentally the day I start rereading YOU UPDATED THE STORY WHICH MADE ME SOO HAPPY I loved this chapter! I Hope you keep writing :)

As much as how this will sound bad. The ending made my fucking day. Finally a romance high school story of PJO that will not have the over used cliche Percabeth. Finally the fans will know the future of possibilities. Oh thank GOD. FUCK annabitch. I'm so tired of that character (also don't think I'm made at how you made her in this story, you did a wonderful job, its just i hate her, and this adaptation made me hate her to ungodly levels) oh good god it could be Rachel, Calypso, Reyna possibly since we haven't seen her yet i think, and the oh so perfect Piper. Now i wouldn't be surprised that if in the long run annabitch gets with Percy, I'd personally just be sad that it wasn't someone worth his time. Thank you for making my day chief, hope yours stays good.
Also as a final, rest in peace doggo, may you chase balls, bite bones, and chase squirrels in the biggest backyard ever.

this chapter definitely didn’t disappoint! lol their relationship is a mess, but I love it. I loved the POV switches it lets us see how the others are doing. can’t wait for the next chapter! also take your time your struggles matter more then us getting an update :) and yes I come here from wattpad just to type a review :)

for all of those fic i ever read, man. this is the most complicated fic to be honest. u did really good at this point. u make people think what is the best for the character lol i cant even stand on percabeth anymore XD on one side i really want percabeth to be real but on the other side i think this bitch isn't worthy for him anymore and after saw the rest of the chapter i really think rachel is the best for percy. damn u really messed up my mind. for the rest of the gang, u got my attention on Leo, Nico, and Grover. they're the best bf u ever got LOL overall this is good, nopee. honestly really good, sorryyy my english is not good XD XD XD

Oh come on man. Longer chapters, or update like every 3 minutes! I cant get enough of this! I gotta see Percy and Leo mess with Frank and wreck the town, lol. Oh! I have an idea!

Way to go! Can’t wait for the next one

You know... when I saw that the next chapter came out I like immediately dropped my homework that’s due um... tomorrow and read this... I did finish my homework but this is 1000% better. I’m shipping Percy and Piper soooo MCUH like ughhhhh I can’t even develop words! Your writing is soooo good like I might even want to start writing a fanfic and post it here... like I’ve been scared to do that because like what if I can’t upload or like that shit. Your amazing I can’t wait till your next chapter!

Dude. I re read this and like the character development is amazing. Like percy the little nerd to heartbroken to getting a college chick and now piper Oooo and I like Nico and Thalia its like how a real relationship between them would be in my opinion.

That was so fuckin good. i can't wait for the next chapter!

Nah I totally get the whole Percy and piper thing, it hurts just a tiny bit but I do think it's a great plot idea. Your a really talented writer can't wait to the next chapter, some shits gonna go down.