I agree with your opinion about the manga.

Honestly, the longer ithe series went on the worse it got. Sure there were a few cool things here and there, but mostly I felt it was fanservice, filler, pairing-orientated chpters and plotholes.

Rant done, this story has potential. I don't really know much about the DBZ series, but I like the use you made of it here.

The fight scene was epic, your description of it is amazing. Not too many details, but enough for us to imagine the scene in our minds. It was also pretty realistic and dynamic. So, props to you.

The date on the first chapter also was a surprise not just because of the way you wrote it (weird but definitely good), but because whenever there's date in stories like these the authors mostly use the 'tell, no show' policy (only say it happened, never show or go into detail on anything that happened in it), The fact you did write that shows dedication few have and creativity enough that's even rarer.

I hope to read more soon. Keep up the good work.

Yikes being trained by the God of Destruction would seriously make him OP!

NatsuxErza is truly the best pairing in Fairy Tail!
Lucy can just date and suck anyone she wants!

need new chapter mannnn

Update plz

Update plz can he do gravity traing and the heavy suits plz come on

Did he work on his lighting flame mode he should master it can he do the training goku and vegeta did in those heavy suits

Man I love this story! Please continue to update! I hope Natsu will grow stronger than Loyda and I kind of want her in the harem as well! Hehe. Reminds me of Juvia a bit except way stronger

I really enjoy this. Hopfully you will continue this story. I can't wait to read another chapter and see how strong Natsu becomes. I especially can't wait to see want go's done in the grand magic games now that Natsu is not only a dragon slayer but a dragon GOD slayer.

Lol so natsu was loydas prisoner for a while and then they fought, only for beerus and whiz to go and save him xD but I agree completely with you man mashima didn't want natsu to be op so he screwed that up and kept giving the others like the ice dildo a power up so ghey can keep up with natsu...completely pathetic right.

Lol natsu just attracts women no matter where he goes xD but I couldn't find anything on loyda, I mean I don't follow db super so I don't know who she is only that she looks egyptian, maybe that datk skined woman that looked like a sexy cleopatra.

Damn that is one well planned conspiracy they have there, but now that natsu knows what he needs to do he will do it and do everything in his power to stop them.

Lol acnologia is so screwed once natsu finishes his training with beerus xD

I have to admit I quute like naza, so it put me completely crazy that mashima decided to go ahead with that monstruosity he calls jerza...oh god tgat makes ne soooo sick, but thankfully we have stories like this one where natsu not only shows how he is the perfect man, but not just for erza either hehe.

Can’t wait to see more bro