Reviews for Mr Nurse |
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Zelgirl48 chapter 1 . 7/5/2017 This was too cute and I really liked the description in it. Feli would have totally been me, just sit there and videotape it all without saying a single word... Also, the whole "shmuck" thing or whatever made me laugh so much! Even I was like, "wait what is he trying to say?" The fluff in this was great and I also enjoyed when he went out and ranted about his "clingy patient." Keep writing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2017 IT WAS SO FANTASTIC! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2017 I love this so much its so cute! |
elsinaa69 chapter 1 . 12/21/2016 I thought your descriptions were great! The flow between paragraphs and plot points was interesting and well done. The fiction was also super-duper cute and funny! The only thing I think you could fix is that you never brought Feli back up after the room visit. I felt he was just left to hang in the story there. |
Loki chapter 1 . 12/21/2016 Evil spirits writing through humans once again. Stop writing about me. I am warning you humans as well. This will not be pretty. I hate all of you getting entertainment from my pain. |
SonoSvegliato chapter 1 . 12/20/2016 Oh my gosh XD This was a masterpiece. A mate A Bless you My gosh Masterful piece of writing. Masterful, I tell you. |
SweetHoneyBee chapter 1 . 12/20/2016 I think it's better if you did continue using this because the descriptions are flawless. It flows smoothly on every paragraph to the point that I had reach the ending and felt a bit hanged because it felt incomplete, but it was nice anyway. You also did your research as well |
inoc123 chapter 1 . 12/20/2016 omg |
NordicsAwesome chapter 1 . 12/20/2016 Oh my god, this was hilarious XD I love it! |
maryranstadler1 chapter 1 . 12/20/2016 That was so funny and so cute! Love! |
pastaaddict chapter 1 . 12/20/2016 Pure Spamano! Love it! X3 |