| Reviews for Vertigo |
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   IvyontheWall chapter 2 . 4/26 I need more of this story, like yesterday! |
| DarkWitch137 chapter 2 . 6/28/2018 Please let the hiatus on this story and soon it's only two chapters and I'm already hooked |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/30/2017 Sky is a really interesting character and I wonder if there’s a reason why Sookie can’t read her mind. Is she another kind of supe? Hope you update soon! |
| CrystalVixen93 chapter 2 . 5/8/2017 Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2017 Too much description of how beautiful she is. Paragraphs of dry description are the surest way to lose a reader. Show, don't tell! Your summary/plot seems interesting, but it is hard to get into the chapter because the description causes you to just read it. You should help the reader EXPERIENCE it but using actions, thoughts, feelings, etc., not just description a mirror could tell you. |
| belladu57 chapter 2 . 1/14/2017 Very good |
| Emmettluver2010 chapter 2 . 1/8/2017 This is great I hope you update soon |
| FreeSpiritSeeker chapter 2 . 1/6/2017 Really love this so far. Alcide and Eric are two of my favorite characters (Godric being #3!). And I love Sky's personality, she doesn't take anyone's crap. Love it! Can't wait for more! |
| RebelRae chapter 2 . 1/3/2017 Ooooh I'm so excited to read what happens next! |
| RebelRae chapter 1 . 12/30/2016 A rum and coke with no rum is simply a glass of Coke 'a' Cola or simply known as Cola |
