Reviews for Lost World
RavenMuse91 chapter 22 . 4/26/2017
That was freaking awesome! The parts where Sans and the main character were together were so cute! I would have squealed if I didn't want my cat to freak out and run around the house like the sky was falling. This was a fantastic end and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
RavenMuse91 chapter 21 . 4/18/2017
That was awesome, epic even. Sans kicked Gaster's butt and now he can't come back to ruin everything. Oh, I can't wait for them to reunite and have a happy ending, which is what I'm guessing is what will happen. I might be wrong but I still want to see Sans and the main character live happily ever after. Keep up the awesome work and good
RavenMuse91 chapter 20 . 4/11/2017
O.O This isn't the end right? Things will turn around in the next chapter right? Well besides the shocking turn of events that aren't that shocking now that I think about it. Well, I like the part where she didn't kill for the sake of killing, but in revenge. Can't wait to see what's next, good luck with your writing.
LAminatronic chapter 1 . 4/11/2017
Your right, its not an animation or video game...

its fan fiction
BeePrince chapter 17 . 4/9/2017
Im not trying to be rude but this is about the fanfic in general its spelled alphys not you have alot of spelling errors so check it out writer to writer
BeePrince chapter 4 . 4/7/2017
Ima cry
RavenMuse91 chapter 19 . 4/4/2017
I can't wait till they're reunited with Sans and Pap, I also kinda wanna see what's going to happen to Asgore. I forgot to talk about the ending of the last chapter. That dark thought of her hurting Asgore for what he's done to them is exciting. I can't wait! Oh and I wonder what Flowey went back for, hm, did he go back to Toriel?
RavenMuse91 chapter 18 . 3/31/2017
I love this story! I don't usually read AU stories but I really like this one. I love how your character battles with herself to do the right thing and i love her relationship with Sans.
Aqua and Luna's dead account chapter 2 . 3/14/2017
So, I'm kind of confused as to what universe this takes place in. I would assume the canon Undertale Universe, but the way Flowey describes Toriel and the Main Character describes Nabstablook, it is a bit close to UnderFell. Although it may be just me over reacting. For all I know, that wasn't Nabstablook.
I really like how well written this story is. I'm surprised you only have two reviews. You deserve way more. I like it so far!
~Aqua
MachUPB chapter 8 . 1/17/2017
Cool story. Consider me intrigued. :D
I look forward to the next chapter.
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 5 . 1/2/2017
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

This is the Underfell reality, right? May I ask why you decided to use that one? Instead of Undertale or one of the others?