Ok, first I'll confess ... I dont speak much in English, but I have more or less good writing (according to me hehe) so I hope that this comment comes out understandable.
1-It's a bit sad (7.7) to see that there aren't many fics of this great anime / manga, but to find one with the same sensation that the manga transmits... is great.

2-The wording seemed quite natural and fluid.

3- I loved the dialogues of each character, they were very attached to their personalities reflected in the manga. Well done!

4-It was very gratifying to see that the other characters were included in the whole show of making chocolates for Tatsumi.

5-Hehehe, I could really imagine the face of horror of Tatsumi to see the disaster haha I like so much that part.
Anyway, I really liked your fic, and definitely already in my favorites. Thank you.

Io-chan (-w-)

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Oh it's so cute! I love this story!

Aw this is so sweet! Its just like how the anime would be, if this were to happen :D

It's so cuuute 3