| Reviews for Bite |
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   zoejaneh101 chapter 3 . 1/19 I love this so much oh my gorsh! |
| ABeaupain chapter 3 . 9/13/2019 “He's not that immortal.” What a wonderful sentence, especially in relation to a crazy cook’s concoctions. |
| FlightyFuschia chapter 3 . 8/18/2019 I've been biding my time this whole week to sit down properly and read this long-awaited update. And you surely did not disappoint. I very much enjoy the constrast between Rogu's and Orochimaru's pov's. There are a plethora of details to giggle about with either of them, from the layers of innuendo and quickstep of your action scenes to the refreshing introspection of your characters and the roaring might that has always been Orihime's fighting potential. Gah, I can't wait to see where it all goes! You've certainly laid your hooks in well, tethered the three foreign fighters with certain Bleach ones. Not sure how you will pull them into the spirit world-or if they'll pull themselves. Perhaps these extracuricullar activities will finally catch someone's eye and instigate more than a verbal spar? Will you incorporate the Vizard? Or are you waiting until the ensemble returns with Rukia? As much curiosity as I have for how Chad and Orihime would fare now...I kinda wouldn't mind the wait. Once the captains take their foray into Karakura things would coalesce into a delicious four-sided whirlpool yes? And when Orihime gets kidnapped-shit, the Arrancar don't stand a chance against a raging Snake Sannin. Ah, I hope your life gives you some time to write. Thanks! |
| L00pp chapter 3 . 7/18/2019 Very interesting idea. Urahara and Orochimaru seem similar and yet so different. Cant wait for more! Please! You are amazing writer! |
| FireInLife chapter 2 . 7/16/2019 I still love this story and all of the interactions. And Orihime/Rukia has probably bevome my OTP for Bleach (alongside Ichigo/Grimmjow) despite never considering it before now. They would be so cute. Idk if it will be updated, and I feel like this story will be getting pretty hard to write. But I really do love what you've written so far. Thank you! |
| bisexuwhale chapter 3 . 6/13/2019 THIS IS SO CUTE! ALLL THE KUDOS |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/12/2019 3 |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/17/2019 I love your Orochimaru stories. They are amazing, like this one. |
| Bergholt Stuttley Johnson chapter 3 . 2/1/2019 Parental Orochimaru is my new favourite Naruto character. |
| lance215 chapter 3 . 10/17/2018 I.. love this fic, I cannot believe you thought of something so original (well I can, because I've read a lot of your fics) XD) I hope that somewhere in the future you continue it, because I love the idea of Oro mentoring Orihime, and everything in general about this fic |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 3 . 8/30/2018 BRILLIANT! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/3/2018 3 |
| Genesis chapter 3 . 4/6/2018 Since I know that you don't update any stories on this site any more, I'll beg you on my knees to at least continue updating Bite on ArchiveOfOurOwn. This story just makes my day! |
| bleeb90 chapter 3 . 1/22/2018 I loved it! |
| Ploonet chapter 3 . 1/13/2018 i love this story! please update soon |
