I like that you put in Shiro's perspective and showed it's not one-sided.

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its so good i really like your characterization of shiro and sora you capture them really well ! i hope you update soon its one of my fav!

i like it, more if you can

I really want to see them be with each other

Gods yes! I’m new to this fandom, but so far all I’ve seen is poor Shiro pining for Sora! But this...! Oho! Sora’s gonna get it this time.

Seriously though, it’s nice if the guy is the one going after the girl. It should be like that traditionally speaking. The other way is too harem-like for my liking... geez.

Good luck for your finals and great chapter keep up the great work

I'm so glad you're still writing! This is one of my favourite ngnl fanfics
haha I'm also having my finals good luck to you!

Haha
Hahahaha
I'm not crying you're crying
JFHKAGJGGDKYDKGXHCHCKHXHLXHLCL THIS WAS SOOOOOOO AMAZING AHHHHHHHH
It was cool seeing Shiro's PoV for once! I mean, I'm obviously interested in Sora's side of the story too, but tbh Shiro is my favorite, so it was nice to get a glimpse into how she's doing! Even if she's not doing very well :( The Imanity boy is a dick. Did he know she's the queen?
And the last line? HOLY SHIT I CAN'T EVEN-
Isn't Sora through puberty, through? I mean, if Shiro's fifteen then that would make him ~22, right?
But I feel so sorry for him jeeeeeeeez
That passage about Shiro and the rain? That took my breath away omg, you're so talented!
Good luck with the finals, hope you're still alive in the end to finish this :)

I haven't reviewed a story in a really, really long time. I once wrote a story for the NGNL archive, kind of a bad one, but it got a lot of reviews and such, until I got one bad comment and deleted it. I'm pretty sure you won't get one of those, because this story is mesmerizing. I mean it, it's a wonderful work of literature, it would be even if it wasn't fanfiction or featured one of my otps. You have a way of writing that is artful in its' own way, even if there was no plot, the way you pace it is brilliant, it's almost like a good song, in which every phrase feels meaningful. In conclusion, please write more, I understand it's hard when you have a job or if you're a student, but you are so talented and this story is a masterpiece. Thanks and good luck!

~Maria

aww poor sora ! I like how you describe his internal turmoils and struggles, their so interesting but at the same time heartbreaking to know T_T I'm looking forward to read more so keep up the good work!

Continue soon please because I love fluffy Shora but there are barely any fics with them!

Oh my god this is so cute AHHH I CAN'T
ANYWAY, I'm so happy you updated! I've said it before, but this is one of my favorite NGNL fics. I've shipped Sora and Shiro on and off before, but you've made it one of my favorite ships. This chapter is totally adorable and definitely lives up to your standards.

Aaaaaand now I'm actually crying. Thanks a lot, Miss Author.
(Or Mister, idk)
Just kidding! That sarcasm was totally fake. They're good tears, anyways. Sad, but in a happy way, y'know?
...You probably don't, I don't even think /I/ know. But this, just like the last chapter, was absolutely beautiful. There are only two chapters, and I can already say that this is one of my favorite NGNL fanfics ever. So kudos to you!
Anyhow, I'll be waiting for the next update!