Reviews for The Job (continued) & The Date
Dernhelm from the East chapter 10 . 9/22/2019
This is the best Jim and Pam fic I've read so far. Sweet, tender, awkward, and romantic at the same moment. And smutty, of course. I usually avoid works with M rating, but yours is so well-written that I just couldn't stop reading. I love the characters, I heard their voices in my head while I was reading. I adore their dialogues, decisions, and - the most important - their mutual consent. This is so important, but I rarely find something like this in the stories.
Thank you so much for your work! I think I'll keep re-reading it again and again :)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/22/2019
I have no idea when you wrote this fic, but you shouldn’t have to grovel for reviews! I don’t think this theme could ever be overplayed, and you’ve written it beautifully. Very nicely done.
Bearmauls chapter 10 . 5/20/2019
This was extremely well-written. And has one of the best written, and most tasteful sex scenes I've found in fanfiction. Seriously good work.
Bearmauls chapter 8 . 5/20/2019
That was an incredibly well-written intimacy scene.
Unbeautifully-Broken chapter 10 . 1/19/2019
I realize it’s been a while since you wrote this, but I actually didn’t start watching the Office until a few months ago and binged the whole thing on Netflix. You captured Jim and Pam so well, I could picture it totally happening that way between them. They never did or said anything uncharacteristic that pulled me out of the story. I came here hoping to find a story that would fill in the blanks about what happened after The Job, and I’m blown away that I found exactly what I was hoping for! So, Thanks for writing this! Perfect.
The Real Mrs.Snape chapter 9 . 9/17/2018
Pam tasted like fruity garlic! Lol
zebrastripes88 chapter 10 . 9/17/2018
This story is so well-written and on point with the characters. I absolutely loved it!
Amy chapter 6 . 4/24/2018
I can see all of this playing out in my head. Great job!
Amy chapter 4 . 4/24/2018
This is the best I have read for jim and pans first date. I love it!
bob chapter 6 . 3/18/2018
kinda zapping all the fun out of it there
breatheincontagiousxx chapter 10 . 12/11/2017
So great! You really have their characterization down perfectly.
diannita23 chapter 10 . 11/29/2017
This was so great and romantic, the Chemistry you created was so spot on, for the most part it was exactly how I imagined there relationship starting and evolving into the epic love story we all know and love. Very well done
Guest chapter 10 . 8/12/2017
My teenage son started watching The Office on Netflix and it made me think of my favorite TV couple. This is the best story I've ever read about them, hands down!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/7/2017
Wow you killed it wolf girl! No technical mistakes and beautiful descriptiveness! I love how meticulous you are with POV switches and careful sequencing. The way you incorporated word pictures that caused the reader to remember bits and pieces of the Office was also quite clever. Very well done!
Stephair chapter 10 . 6/20/2017
I loved this story and getting to read about their (real) first date-something that I wish the show hadn't skipped over. This was perfect and I could totally envision Jim and Pam doing what you described. Thanks so much!
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