Qrow has pink eyes

this deadass broke my heart...especially the last line

I just wanted to say that the poem is beautiful, but it says at the beginning that italics are Summer and normal is Qrow, but there are some places where you mixed that up.

Really loving these poems. The way you capture the dark and light themes makes me get goosebumps. Keep up the awesome writing and have a great day/night!

I can't believe I forgot to add this to my favorites yet! It's about time!
I love these little poems! They capture the characters very well! Not to mention they rhyme! Must be difficult at times, but a well worth effort!
Can't wait for more!

The long awaited canon Mercury poem did not dissapoint. Those last two lines were perfect "And maybe, just maybe I can add you to my murder list." That sounded perfectly like him.

It also had his 'voice' in it, like how he taunted ruby with magnets vs metal. Very good. A kind of sarcastic venom. Now I think about it Mercury is a poisonous element, perhaps that's why they gave him a love for sarcastic comments and venomous remarks. A venomous tongue or poisonous words or something like that (I know venom isn't the same as poison, that was a favorite discussion topic after Tyrian stabbed Qrow in the fandom).

Excellent poem all in all

As for the second well it was decent don't get me wrong, but I am really not a fan of repetitive sentences like you did with "hold together". It sounds like a broken record player. I know it's a form of poetry, but just not one that enjoys my support. So not a big fan of "Hold Together" ah well can't have them all can you?

So yeah just Adam left for the bad guys unless you make some form of poetry about the Grimm or the White fang as organization.

There are a few other badies, but those haven't met Ruby yet. Hazel and Watts know of her and her accomplishments, but that's not really anything to interesting to write about.

Whitley and Jacques don't even know her at all.

Keep it up.

Holy Christ, those last two poems were amazing. Like always you are like a queen and your words are like your well trained army, moving in perfect unison to your commands. Like a beautiful wave that can get passed any defenses to get to there destination.

Until next time,
~R.R.

That's an interesting thought. It would be neat to see Neo trying to get revenge on Ruby.

Well I like your poetry, but MercuryxRuby is just no for me.I can't picture Mercury with any girl on the show at the moment (no I can't see him with any boys either). Emerald would be the most compatible so far, but not a real fan of that ship either to be fair.

Still I don't have a problem with these little fanwork poems.

I am eager to get the real canon Mercury poem though and well like you said "He's going to have a lot less protective tone in that one." A poem with the killer intent and the sadisme that we know Mercury possesses would be nice. He is shown enjoying battling, blaming Yang, he fired at Ruby's scroll, prevented her form helping Penny and enjoying the despair she was in when Ruby saw Penny death.

As for the Qrow and Summer poem well I am going to admit I like this ship a lot. Personally I can't really see a single bit of Taiyang in Ruby, so Summer got some really dominant *wink*wink genes apparently.

At first i thought Qrow was going to turn out to be her dad, but it starts to look like Roosterteeth is serious with Taiyand being her dad. *schrugs* whatever works I guess.

Keep it up.

Well that certainly came faster than what I thought it would take. Heh-heh.

See you soon, I guess. Duces Vanessa.

~R.R.

Hey good luck with the new semester, and I can't wait to see it.

Till next time, duces.
~R.R.

a poem form salem to ruby would be interesting

I have noodle arms too. But my friend and I are both gonna fight and riot if Qrow dies. And good chapter. I loved it.

By the way, have you got any plans for a Weiss poem. I'd love to read that.

You're welcome, and I feel you there, with the Qrow scenario.

~R.R.S. IV