Veri n1c3oa8st0ri1k

Veri n1c3mOmst0ria9

how could anyone think badly of izetta!? some cliff hangar

Lov

A great chapter again.
This is an AU, therefore you don't need to take the canon timeline into consideration so much.
The Africa Korps failed, because they didn't get all the resources they needed,since Germany was also fighting Russia at the same time. Therefore without an attack on Russia and with enough supplies their chances for victory would have been much higher. This could have put some presure on the British.
Please update soon.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH SHIIIIIIIIT!

The time has come. Izetta, prepare to know the Martial Court! Also, Afrika Korps pretty much run over the brittsh until suplies problems started. So, to this point, the brittish in Africa are pretty much falling back completely.

Feels like Izetta: The Last Witch is like an alternate universe of Strike Witches; but with no Striker Units, no Neuroi, and not many witches around. And like a darker and grittier version of Strike Witches.

A very good chapter again.
Since this is an AU, perhaps you could change the german war strategy a little bit and concentrate the war on the conflict with Britain. Their strategy could be to defeat Britain first before going after Russia and with Fine, Izetta and the other governments in exile there they could have even more reason to do so. They could try to starve Britain by attacking with their submarines and planes or give more troops and supplies to Rommel for example, which would have been the better strategy.
Please update soon.

This chapter was good, even if the laws weren't all ok. The conversation at the cell was good too. But in the anime, the king of Germany wanted to make peace with the Allies to attack the russians, and even attemp a peace treaty, not attack them before end the war in the east.

A great chapter again.
You could try to mix your version with the canon, by making the nazis just the leading political party, which supports the emperor. The germanians in the canon were quite bad, since they wanted to conquer the world and imprisoned or destroyed all their political enemies, but at least they weren't genocidial maniacs. Perhaps you could introduce some decent ones?
Please update soon.

A chapter full of explanations, about what make Izetta fall in jail. And seriously, Ortfiné is going get the whole prision into chaos because her actions. Anyway, see ya next chapter!

RedSS.

Happy to see this story has been updated! This was another great chapter also I am happy to see fíne fighting for Izzetas freedom though I wonder where she will get the money from since she is so fare away from home in a different land...All in all keep up the good work!

But seriously. That whole battle between Izetta and the clone was utter BS. Either one of then could have killed the other easily. What I was just dying to see was one good shot from a sniper, or even an ordinary rifle, smack that... thing, right in the side of the head. Or maybe, they never succeeded in human cloning in the first place. I stopped watching past that point, which I was sad to do because it was otherwise a great story that should have been given a proper ending. And they could even have had a second season or something where the Sov- I mean Volga Federation, ends up in a war with the Allies in the race for Berlin and tensions that follow. That would have made a great second season. But no, they had to screw it up. I shouldn't be complaining to you, but I'm still pretty pissed about this.

No. The best we could have hoped for was for the Germans to NOT inexplicably develop cloning technology in the 1930s. That'd be a great ending. They had a good story going, but apparently it was just 'too original'. Because apparently people simply can't be trusted with a story that doesent have a main hero and main villain. So instead of having an interesting story, they had to ruin it by literally creating an overpowered character for the hero to ALMOST lose to before the power of friendship or something saves the day. As if that hasn't been done before. I don't accept this ending, so I'm not reading your story.

Wow! This fic is amazing so fare! I cant wait for the next chapter with this ending!