This is good i want more please.

Fantastic so far, the description of The Batter is spot-on.

I love this so far! All the characters are very IC, I could definitely see this happening. Amazing job!

Would you please finish it! I really like it!

So far so good!
I like this story

Kinda sad how stories this good, new, and interesting just simply don't attract the followers it deserves. I can see how many(if not all) writers on the site, simply have trouble writing. When there is no feedback to help inform them of what they're doing. Making the story hard to improve.

I don't know if this is specifically the case for you, or if the story is finished or not. But I'd just like to say that what was here was nicely written, and I hope you continue writing whatever it is that you enjoy!

I'm so happy I found such a good story when I'm this late to the OFF party ;w; Please update soon

For once, someone portrays OFF perfectly.

Gotta say I love how even Batter agrees that Papyrus is an innocent cinnamon roll

As I have recently found myself being thrown into the OFF fandom, it's nice to see a well-written story that combines some of my old and new favorite games.

Stay determined, and try not to purify this story out of existence.

sCREAMS
YES SO HAPPY THIS UPDATED
I just really love this story, it's so well-written; plus it's hard to find an OFF/Undertale crossover that's don't worry, I understand not being able to find time! Just move at your own pace

I do quite like this, and I hope it continues as well as it is currently progressing. Well done so far, and hopes to the future, dear writer.

This can only end in tears.

Or will it?

Of course, i can't say for sure, but i can only await your next chapter!

Stay Pure my friend!

I really love this story! This seems to be going in an interesting direction; I hope you'll continue it

This is great! Please continue!