why do they need this they have a bathroom at potter manor and potter island wtf?

hmm rape scenes

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I won’t hate you for hating Dumbledore, cause I don’t love nor hate him. Btw, amazing story!

the whole pure bloods being squibs was a bit weird and the fact that everyone else can also become as powerfull as harry and ginny in time just is a bit weird noone has ever tried physical training and stressibg their cores i personaly think it would be better if the soul bond makes the core strong only and not both althought that is just my opinon its a lovely story but would need some editing at some parts where it got hard to understand or weird like ginny being rons twin i didnt understand that until like chapter 7

Great story, I love the plot and I love Harry and Ginny’s strength and power. Soul bonding fics are my favourite and I can’t wait to read the next one

I’m done. Ten chapters of getting mildly annoyed at the blatant, weak plot armour has finally gotten me annoyed enough to drop it.

And why the bloody hell has he still not read Moody’s mind? It’s been an entire year and he’s read everyone BUT Moody’s mind.

Bloody hell. Would not a patronus have sufficed? Or maybe stunning the man and shadow stepping WITH him to the office? So many more logical paths to have taken for Harry who supposedly had tactical training but his response is to leave someone he has no faith in to look after a crazed man who was clearly on the run from someone dangerous. In other words, the only path to take less logical would be to have suddenly killed both Krum and Crouch on the spot.

Aaaand now you’re telling me that after six centuries of learning from mistakes, the Flamels didn’t have the foresight to tell Harry and Ginny that just a single night apart would have such a negative effect on their psyche? At this point the story is just a game of seeing how many plot holes that are convenient for your plot there are in a chapter.

This was my genuine reaction to how he asked her to the ball. I grimaced and said “Fuck me dead, that’s gay.” It’s bad enough if it was him proposing to her, which is a serious confession of love and a promise for life... this is just him asking her to a bloody dance.

Again... LEGILIMENCY! Why bother observing how Moody and Dumbledore interact to see if Moody has listened to the warnings? He could find out in half a bloody second, no observation needed. If you have to make characters act out of character just to prolong the story, the story immediately becomes worthless as any progression just gets chucked out the window for your own convenience.

You’ve been inconsistent. When Harry read Bill’s mind, you said they could bypass any defences without the victim being aware. But now Snape and Hermione, a novice were perfectly aware of it. The reading too... you have him read almost everyone, but don’t have him read McGonagall (who he just trusts for whatever reason), Dumbledore (the main problem) or Remus (you actually mentioned waiting and seeing if they could trust him, like you completely forgot they just got through reading people’s minds). It’s rough reading something so full of holes.

You dun messed up by making them have OP legilimency powers... there’s no need for any of the interrogating that they’re doing and whatever shit show they put on at Hogwarts to find out what Dumbledore knows will be forced, since they could simply read his mind at a glance... better still, without him even knowing that they have.

Wow, I can’t believe I’ve never read this story lol it’s a little far fetched but I liked it haha anyway thanks for writing it, I look forward to the next one which I’m about to start reading!