Reviews for A Forlorn Knight
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2019
Good... God... this is terribly written! Grammer, spelling, improper sentences... I could go on but this made my eyes bleed!
Chibi-Juubi chapter 1 . 6/27/2019
Harem pls
Chibi-Juubi chapter 2 . 6/27/2019
Harem
Chibi-Juubi chapter 3 . 6/27/2019
It seems that Raven is winning but I want harem.
Midnight49 chapter 3 . 6/21/2019
I’m shipping Raven x Jaune!
gunruner420 chapter 3 . 2/26/2019
I vote for Harem
roxtarsgalaxy chapter 3 . 2/20/2019
I vote for Harem
The Critic chapter 1 . 1/13/2019
The grammar and plot gave me a headache
Guest chapter 3 . 9/11/2018
Great story so far more!
Engineer1869 chapter 3 . 7/1/2018
Really enjoying this story so far and I look forward to future updates.
Just to clarify, is Jaune semblance still Aura Amplification/Manifpulation and the telepathy is just an offshoot of his semblance?
ouroborosdragon chapter 3 . 6/3/2018
Is this dead have you abandoned this story?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
Fucking pece of Shit ass cunt go fucking kill your self and take this pece of shit with you
Rakkis3059 chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
The first chapter of this is wonderful. I am loving how you are tying cannon into it. Can't wait to read more
Sm0keyPanda chapter 3 . 11/10/2017
This is beautiful and I love it and never stop
Wyrmraker chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
While you have a solid and interesting plot, the run-on sentences, spelling, and punctuation need work. I do hope you will continue this story.
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