Reviews for A Forlorn Knight |
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2019 Good... God... this is terribly written! Grammer, spelling, improper sentences... I could go on but this made my eyes bleed! |
Chibi-Juubi chapter 1 . 6/27/2019 Harem pls |
Chibi-Juubi chapter 2 . 6/27/2019 Harem |
Chibi-Juubi chapter 3 . 6/27/2019 It seems that Raven is winning but I want harem. |
Midnight49 chapter 3 . 6/21/2019 I’m shipping Raven x Jaune! |
gunruner420 chapter 3 . 2/26/2019 I vote for Harem |
roxtarsgalaxy chapter 3 . 2/20/2019 I vote for Harem |
The Critic chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 The grammar and plot gave me a headache |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/11/2018 Great story so far more! |
Engineer1869 chapter 3 . 7/1/2018 Really enjoying this story so far and I look forward to future updates. Just to clarify, is Jaune semblance still Aura Amplification/Manifpulation and the telepathy is just an offshoot of his semblance? |
ouroborosdragon chapter 3 . 6/3/2018 Is this dead have you abandoned this story? |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2018 Fucking pece of Shit ass cunt go fucking kill your self and take this pece of shit with you |
Rakkis3059 chapter 1 . 11/28/2017 The first chapter of this is wonderful. I am loving how you are tying cannon into it. Can't wait to read more |
Sm0keyPanda chapter 3 . 11/10/2017 This is beautiful and I love it and never stop |
Wyrmraker chapter 1 . 9/3/2017 While you have a solid and interesting plot, the run-on sentences, spelling, and punctuation need work. I do hope you will continue this story. |