Ahhh I'm reaching the end of this masterpiece i love this so much

Accent is one of my favorite parts of this story.

God I want to know whats going on with shapard SO MUCH! Great chapter.

Detroit: Become Quarian

trailer for metal rage fisting 3!

Oh my god the level of dedication and formatting for just this chapter makes me so grateful authors like you and your Beta's exist. Thank you so much for your story! Never played Titanfall cause Warframe gave me that fix but your story is making my Chassis itch.

Never get to see the Council races POV's in (Insert Game Universe Humanity) First Contact and crossover fics.
Love the culture you've built just through this reddit-esque shitposting of comments that funnily enough really humanizes their distrust and fears as comparable to our own.

Just thank you so much for this!

This chapter is hilarious! Well done!

I LOVE THAT CHAPTER OF REACTION COMMENTS! AHAHAHAHAHAA! You nailed the internet perfectly.

is there a reason the criminal factor of the frontier militia is ignored, the wiki states that while the militia did contain simple colonists looking to protect their sovereignty it was mostly made of mercs and pirates who felt threatened by the IMC trying to enforce order over the region (admittedly a ruthless, exploitative form of order but a functional one none the less).

while I could see the frontier militia evolving from something reminiscent of the old Chinese pirate federation into a generic parliamentary republic like the systems alliance, I find it doubtful without some serious explaining. maybe something to do with the influence of the many IMC admirals that deserted.

anyways other than that I have no real complaints. it's always nice to see underappreciated crossover material like titanfall getting a lengthy stories devoted to it like this one.

I would read a story based only in the forums you made, I think it was called Ascent!?

Honestly, I enjoy reading ME crossovers from the perspective of the ME races, especially when the crossover Humanity is significantly different, such as Warhammer or Star Wars. I look forward to the reboot.

I guess u understand where you are coming from with the thought that Jane and company aren't very fleshed out, or at least not as fleshed out as Nihlus and his crew. But at the same time, that's one of the things I liked most. Not that the Titanfall people were one-note, but in particular how the Citadel races reacted to them. But a story like this can only benefit from a narrative restructuring so I look forward to the sequel/prequel/spinoff/sidestory thingamajig.

(Time-travel is weird

Also, are those references to Warframe in the latest chapter titles I see?

Ok at this point the time travel shenanningans is adding eldritch horror to this. Also, Cerberus. What is going on.
So much mystery! I absolutely cannot contain myself.
On a scale from 0 to 100, baseline story started at 0, went up to to 40 then up to 300 in the latest chapters.

Geez we’ve dropped fully into hard sci fi here. Didn’t think the story could get even more interesting.
Also, institutionalised time travel. That concept is so fucking cool. Scratch that, the whole story is so fucking cool.

This fanfic has so much character it’s incredible.
I love those forum chapters. They don’t forward the plot in any way but they help make the world much more credible. The interactions between the posters are quite fun to read.
I really like how people are affected by the cultural aspect of a new alien race introduced and how they react to it.
Or actually just writing about the cultural aspect of civilisation and acknowledging its existence.
This is way more fun than the regular “Humans meet Turians. Let’s see who has bigger and better guns” stories that plagues Mass Effect crossovers.
I didn’t expect Nihlus and his crew to be one of the protagonists of this story, but I’m really liking them. Hope nothing too bad happens to them.
Actual characterisation in a fanfic, who woulda thunk? But seriously, a lot of authors forget that part of their story...
Also, here’s a slogan for Twochanka: “We’ll bang, ok?”