The OVAs were a fucking trip! This was just as funny!

Then you should have read the manga instead of watching the anime because the anime has few scenes added like the leech scene

Very good story anx very funny. Really liked it

Do one for ova 9! I know you don't see Laxus but it could be lots of naughty fun for him and Lucy

The OVA was nothing but pandering to hormonally challenged teenaged boys if you ask me. Just a lot of fan service and not much plot or anything else of value. But at least you managed to write a story that made Laxus go gah gah hard enough to have to intervene between Mira over her control of Lucy. Hahaha.

I realy ship Laxus and Lucy, and your story fullfilled my desire of a great lemon about them both! Thank you for that. :D

Too funny, I love the whiny Laxus at the end.

catspats21 stop being a dick. everyone hates whiners and tattle tales. why even have a mature section if you can't express mature content?

While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain on this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own or AdultFanfiction.

I watched that OVA too and seriously at the end all I could think was what the hell was that.. xD
I like this one shot though, Sparky and Blondie is one of my fave fanfics :3

huh, this was fun to read lol

another great smutty story from you. I love them together

hahahahahaha...Laxus is a meanieand horny...I laugh when read this...good job..author-sama