Reviews for Pathos of the Shinobi
Wicked.A chapter 15 . 9/6
Nice chapter, though yugito should realise that the moment she met Kakashi her mission was a failure...
TheOrangeSpark chapter 5 . 9/4
Not much to say about this chapter. I enjoyed quite a bit of it. The interactions are nice, even though nice and supportive Kurama still feel strange to me.

Naruto saves another person in Shisui. Wasn't surprised with the trend that's been going on. Will he someone use his magic powers to stop the Uchiha massacre? Maybe? Not sure how, though. Things seem pretty far gone. If I had to guess, it will turn out better than in canon but people are still going to die.
WriteGameSaitama chapter 1 . 9/4
kurama had no reason to believe Naruto would be his next jailer
HardlyFlaccid chapter 15 . 9/2
Love the chapter! Hope you update soon!
TheOrangeSpark chapter 4 . 9/1
I enjoyed this chapter. It was entertaining as hell to watch little Naruto rile up Ay so much. The best part? Entirely in character, I could see the Raikage doing this in canon.

I think I would like this story even more if Kurama was still full of hate, and he passed this 'gift' on to Naruto as a curse that he eventually overcame. I don't know, I just feel the negatives of this ability should be explored more. And I don't just mean him being made a target (which is already probably going to happen). Waiting to see if you do anything with that, but I won't be disappointed if you don't.

A villain who can either resist Naruto's ability, or overwhelm his senses somehow would be absolutely amazing to see. Maybe you already have this planned/written. I'm just speculating.

Good chapter. Thanks!
TheOrangeSpark chapter 3 . 8/29
I'm slightly, but not totally, more convinced that he's going to fix everyone's problems. Itachi, Sasuke, Kakashi, and Hiruzen are going to be better off because of the pseudo-mind reader. There just has to be a downside to this ability that you haven't showed up to this point. OP Naruto or not, no way an ability this useful has zero drawbacks. There wouldn't be much of a story if that was the case.

Oh well, will just have to keep reading to find out.
TheOrangeSpark chapter 2 . 8/29
This feels like a fix-it fic. Naruto is just going around and using his OP ability to fix everyone's problems. Hiashi/Hizashi, Neji and Hinata, and maybe Kabuto. I'm not the biggest fans of these types of fics, but I'm not entirely convinced that this is one yet. And, even so, if it is written well I can still enjoy it for what it is.

Never liked Kabuto's character and I'm not sure I can bring myself to do so. Gonna have to see how that bit develops, as well.

I'm not sure if you do this in future chapters, but you should really separate the dialogue of two people. Having them talk on the same line can be very confusing.

Decent chapter. Thanks for writing!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/29
Man I love your story! Needs so much more love; better than 99% of all ficus out there
TigrezzTail chapter 15 . 8/28
Sigh, figures the Raikage would let his fear overcome his common sense. That's what happens when you can't think beyond the endless fighting. You begin to forget how to think of other means of existing. Wicked fights all around. So will Yugito end up getting caught? That'd really but the Raikage in a bind.
thor94 chapter 15 . 8/28
good chapter, the scene with yagura carrying naruto was cute, but glad they escaped kiri.
Also yugito is a fucking bitch, hope their will be huge consequence for kumo to their attempt at kidnapping a jinchuriki and break their treaty (especially since it this not the first time, or even second time they use that dirty trick with konoha), also that bitch will suffer for her actions (could be interesting if at the end she is the one caught and receive the treatment kumo planned for naruto)
jtscores chapter 15 . 8/28
I love all the jinchuriki interactions! They're great. Love the story, keep it up and stay safe :)
insanemaelstorm chapter 15 . 8/28
Nice chapter. Love how much everyone cares about Naruto. Like how hard Naruto is trying. Man Naruto is lucky. Wonder if there will be any fallout of yugito trying to kill Naruto. Can't wait to read more
TheOrangeSpark chapter 1 . 8/27
This had been recommended to me by my friend Yogami Asura, and I finally got around to starting the first chapter.

Your take on Kurama is unique. He's friendly to Naruto right off the bat, which, if done well, is not necessarily a bad thing. I'm a little confused about the ability Kurama was able to gift Naruto. It seems like the emotion sensing greatly exceeds anything the Fox is capable of. How could he pass on something that he didn't even have? I wouldn't even categorize it as emotion sensing most of the time; it's almost mindreading.

It's an insane ability that will probably make the kid OP. I just hope you can make me feel suspense even when Naruto is crazy strong. Yogami says this story is great, so I have a feeling you will deliver.

First chapter was good. Thanks for writing!
AkashimaUchiha chapter 15 . 8/27
Hmm that was cruel of you, a cliffy at the end. Also wondering if you would make a dilemma in the future cause this uniting jinchuriki stuff aint exactly on point with Leaf's or any village goal of self-improvement. So far Naruto have done some things to improve leaf/weaken the other (i.e the attack on Rock) while extending a hand to Roshi for the unites on jinchuriki. Back to the question, would you go down the route on Naruto weakening (as in attacking allies (Leaf itself) or even doesn't aligned himself towards Leaf) for the goal of the unite? This is all based on Sarutobi still leading and working the best outcome for Leaf and not somehow (maybe) lets Naruto do what he wants. Looking forward for more plot.
Fuyuriku chapter 15 . 8/27
Thank you for the read.
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